Alright!
I have something for you guys! It's an entry for JFW's contest. Erm, if you could skip over the cliche vampire-ending thing, that would be great. I was uncreative and couldn't think of another way to end it.
To tell you the truth, I'm fully informed on how to get a critique from you guys. You donate points, and such and such. I'm just getting 30 points out of this post so I can get a free crit. Bwahaha.
Here's the link, if you want it: topic31662.html
Thanks a bunch!
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