Young Writers Society

Dai, no worries, vero? A critique by midnight is a critique on time; and some deadlines get nearer the dead part than is necessarily needed. ^_~

No threatening the mob before the date's come and gone.









IMP

Wouldn't dream of threatening you...

It has been done, with 3 minutes to spare.

Pleasure doin' business wit yous.

-Kylan

I must say, I've seen the critiques given and they are indeed of very high quality

Keep up the job

Cheerios, Chandni

*saunters in, wearing a silver Armani suit, complimented by a long black overcoat*

Hey, how are ya? I have a business proposition for you; why don't you PM me, so we can talk in private.

*walks out*

It's been five days and my piece still hasn't been critiqued. Just a reminder...

You guys are getting lazy

-Kylan

Your Date of request is August 10th.

From: Kylan
To: Cabassi_Crime_Family
Posted: Fri Aug 10, 2007 12:48 am
Subject: You have recieved a donation from Kylan
Kylan has donated 50 Points to you.

Kylan wrote:
Honor #1 in the Action/adventure forum needs critiquing.

-Kylan

Do not press the CCF. We are not above refunding your points and blacklisting you.

And as you can see your previous request was filled the day you sent it.

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Hehehe, you have to watch out with la famiglia. If you're nice, they'll give you cannolis.

And really... who can refuse?

Oh, I'm so sorry! This was a misunderstanding! I wasn't refering to that particular piece in my last post here, but "Cirque de Feu" which I asked to be critiqued five days ago and which I realize now, was completed within the deadline timeframe!

I'm so sorry for the confusion. It's my fault.

-Kylan

Do not press the CCF. We are not above refunding your points and blacklisting you.

hmmm I understand the "do not press" part--no one likes being bothered, and heck, you'll get it done when you can, but I think blacklisting is completely unfair/uncalled for.

Oy, questo e "the mob", Signorina Clau - blacklisting is an inescapable tradition. ^_~

Oh, I'm so sorry! This was a misunderstanding! I wasn't refering to that particular piece in my last post here, but "Cirque de Feu" which I asked to be critiqued five days ago and which I realize now, was completed within the deadline timeframe!

Don't worry, Kylan - misunderstandings are understood to be commonplace. No blacklists and no threats are directed at you. ^_^








IMP

Hey, guys. Just a quick question: I doanted the points for one of my stories to be critiqued, but then the points count was re-set not long after. Do I need to donate again?

I have a proposition.

It's obvious that the CCF has suffered lately. No business, no mob. I think you need to find a way to revitalize. Come back bigger and better (and cheaper) than ever.

Go through discount periods. Have three hour periods where members can get a critique for twenty points. You'll get more business, more attention, and more publicity. Soon people will come to you with the full fifty point because they've seen you around.

Something like that anyway. I thought the CCF was a great idea.

-Kylan

Well, At the moment, Lack of group activity has been the problem.

If the points are reset after you have sent the message you do not need to re-send point. We have a record of all the points donated to us, so we know you gave them, even if they are gone.