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Sun Dec 21, 2008 3:32 pm
Lost_in_dreamland says...



More ?
for what are we without words and stories?





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Sun Dec 21, 2008 3:33 pm
Lost_in_dreamland says...



More ?
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Sun Dec 21, 2008 5:44 pm
Lost_in_dreamland says...



I want to get my third star tonight :D
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Mon Dec 22, 2008 9:59 pm
Lost_in_dreamland says...



Any more?
Please? :lol:
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Tue Dec 23, 2008 12:46 am
Ducati says...



topic40565.html
If you could please.





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Tue Dec 23, 2008 2:21 am
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Incognito says...



I have one but it is kind of lengthy and different...
http://www.youngwriterssociety.com/topic40519.html
I really need peoples feedback because I am in dire need of a critique.
'Everyone is entitled to be stupid, some just abuse the priviledge.'





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Wed Dec 24, 2008 11:08 am
Lost_in_dreamland says...



Done Ducati and Incongnito ;)
this is your chance people, I'm in all day today (on Christmas eve, I know, sad) well, we're going out at half 5 for a 'family' trip to see the lights, out for a meal and then to the cinema. *-)
so any requests? I'll do them now :)
Kirsten *-)
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Wed Dec 24, 2008 2:23 pm
scasha says...



Hey Again Lost in Dreamland,

Would you totally mind doing this one: topic31971.html ? It's long and I don't really want any grammatical nitpicks because I can try and find them myself. If you could just evaluate the story for plot etc. that'd be great. I'm totally willing to donate points!





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Wed Dec 24, 2008 2:57 pm
Lost_in_dreamland says...



Scasha, I'm on it right now ;)
don't worry I don't need a donation :)
-Kirsten xxx
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Mon Jan 12, 2009 10:01 pm
Lost_in_dreamland says...



Okay, anyone ?
I have been majorly slacking on reviews.
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Thu Jan 15, 2009 11:11 pm
thefireinmeisJC says...



Hey Lost!
I basically just picked a random person for a review : - ) and i've never done a "will review for food" request really. i love your username so i picked you lol

anyway, http://www.youngwriterssociety.com/topic42008.html
Not to sound picky or anything, but I want more on the characters and plot etc than grammar. I already know i have horrible grammar :P

Thanks so much!
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Wed Jan 21, 2009 5:23 pm
Lost_in_dreamland says...



Sorry, JC for not realising this was here :lol:

I'll get on it immediately ;)


xxx
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Wed Jan 21, 2009 5:39 pm
Lost_in_dreamland says...



Done JC :D
Kinda short review... sorry :(

xxx

more?
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Wed Jan 21, 2009 10:32 pm
Jon says...



www.youngwriterssociety.com/topic42369.html
It's Realistic Fiction, I would really appreciate it! (only 900 or so words.)
Entitled, 'Orilie Davis' - (Prolouge)

Thankyou! :D
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Wed Jan 21, 2009 10:54 pm
Lost_in_dreamland says...



Jon :D

I shall post it sometime tomorrow. xD

'cuz it's around half eleven and I have maths homework. xD


~Kirsten
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