Young Writers Society

alwaysawriter wrote:I'm really sorry; I forgot to check back on this thing. I'll get right on it.

Thank you very much, I appreciated the reviews and am edited it up as we speak!

As for the question about underlining words; it's for Cal's contest, and it's meant to use words from her table of doom. Those are the words - the ones I underlined, I mean.

I'll have to write the next two up super quick tomorrow. Might send them your way just so you know what I was talking about.


ETA// Also just noticed your correction of my s in realise. I'm British. That's how I spell it

This, please:

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I'm working on my characterization of Deimos. Comments much appreciated! =^.^=

Could you review two chapters of my novel?

Here (topic32756.html)

and here (topic34123.html).

(Action/Adventure story.)

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Pretty please, with a cherry on top?

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Please?

Yeah, I'll get right on those. I have two hours before I start getting ready for my New Student Orientation and I'm told that I'm going to be tortured with shopping after that so it'll get done before the end of today or around there. If it doesn't, I'll get up early tomorrow and work on it.

HC--thanks. I forgot that the spelling is a little bit different and I'll look forward to you PMing them to me.

-alwaysawriter

It's a children's short story type of book.

I need help on it because i am looking to get it published

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Please and thankyou.

Points will be given for the critique or reviews if you so wish

pm me when your done and choose what you want and how much, don't be shy, if you ask for a thousand points then not a thousand points you'll get!

now get to work


just kidding!


thanks


---Jon---

I'm just about done with all of the reviews. I skipped around a bit but I plan on getting them all done tomorrow.

Wisemann--don't worry about the points thing. I don't use my points really anyway so there's no point for you to give any to me.

-alwaysawriter

could you please review my chapter two of my book. of course, it might be a good idea to look over chapter one... andyway, the link is in my sig to chapter 2, and there is a link on chapter 2 to chapter 1, if needed

thank you
-otaku

Yup, no problem. *Goes to add to review list*

Hey, me again. This time it's a poem that people seem to like, 4 gold stars! everyone has given it a gold star and the grammar is good!


please and thankyou!


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Will get on it in a few minutes.

Dumping two more on you, sorry. Contest is over, but still... Hope ya don't mind.


Don't Think Twice, Part Four
Don't Think Twice, Part Five

No problem. *Adds two plus one from TRC on list*

Hey always,

can you crit My Missing Half??

Thanks!