Young Writers Society

[s]Name: Forsaken
Genre: Other Fiction.
Summary: A young bounty hunter gets sent to college on a secret mission to kill all vampires.
Word Count: ....i dunno. its a kind of long first chapter but its an easy read i think.
Link: topic34643.html

The help will be much apprieciated
Also, heads up about my spelling and grammar....well, they suck.[/s]

[s]I hope you're still doing this...if not, then sorry for bumping this topic up.

Name: Visionary
Genre: Romantic Fiction
Summary: A boy finds the meaning of true love.
Wordcount: 498
Link: post446496.html#446496

Thanks![/s]

Oh! I forgot about this. Thanks for bringing it up again!

Hey. Could you please review this for me? It'd be greatly appreciated. Just remember to read the link first, okay? =]

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Thanks a bunch!

To Me, On November 9 2003
narrative poetry
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Thankkkkk youuuuu sooooo muchhhhhh piggggggggie.

I would very much appreciate your highly regarded thoughts on my newest piece.

Name: 16 Days in the land of broken dreams
Genre: Other Poetry
Link: topic38602.html

Thank you in advance for any help you can give me!

dreamintechnicolour
<3

Name: The Method of madness
Genre: Action/adventure
Summary: I guess it's sort of a psychological study of what is debatably a mad person.
Word Count: lots? Less than foru thousand at any rate...
Link: topic38538.html


I like you anyway...


Thanks in advance...

Name: On Broken Wings - Chapter 4
Genre: Realistic Fiction
Summary: A story of a strange, misunderstood girl who seems to have a disorder and is haunted by her past. At this point in the story, she has run away from her sister and mother when the family were on an outing at a carnival; because she had a particularly violent panic attack.
Word Count: 600
Link: topic35810.html

Thankyou very, very much. I really appreciate it.

Sarah
xxx

Yoohoo Snoink!

Name: Snowflakes
Genre: Other Fiction
Summary: It's about a girl who's Mother locks her out in the cold.
Word count: 1,173
Link: topic38876.html

Note: It's for Clo's A Softer World Contest so it would be awesome if you get a critique done for a bit before 30th November.


You rock Snoink!

-Mizz Iceberg

Hey Snoink!

It would be great if you could review my poem "World Disassembled" in Narrative poetry..

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thanks so much!

Sweet lord, people are actually applying to be slaughtered? Why not just go up to a serial killer and say "Sir, if you could do me next, that would be great!"

Haha, this is insane.

Having said that, Oh High Priestess of All That Is Piggy, I might return soon with a petition of my own...

(dun dun dunnnn!)

Just a quick note: you might have to wait several more weeks for your critiques, so sorry. Finals is coming up and, if Jiggy thinks I slaughter people's works, it's nothing compared to the slaughter that will happen to me on my math final, if I slack off now. I'll probably get around to it on my break.

Just keep on revising your stuff and making it better for me. Your critiques that I'll give you will be a whole lot more useful to you if I don't have to keep on talking about artistry and can talk about characters and plot or symbolism and metaphor instead. ^^

Lol, no! I was kidding! Snoink is a very good critiquer :p

Even when she's being molested by Maths XD. Besides you shouldnt listen to me, I jiggle in unwholesomely sinister ways.

Snoink -
Of course I don't mind waiting. It's fully worth it. ^_^
Sarah
xxx

[s]*bows down to the critiquing queen bee that is Snoink*

Name: Don't Fret
Genre: Romantic Fiction
Summary: It's kind of an essay about a silly, silly boy.
Word count: 907
Link: post458158.html#458158

I'll love you forever! (& I don't mind waiting. Finals come first!)
Thank you thank you thank you! [/s]