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Fri Jul 18, 2008 12:21 am
Clo says...



Bada bing! I reviewed the both of you.

And I'm still available.
How am I not myself?





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Fri Jul 18, 2008 12:58 am
Jon says...



now could you do chapters 2-5
you only did the one
thanks

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Thu Jul 24, 2008 6:05 am
Clo says...



Oops! Sorry Wiseman, I'll get to that once I have time.

Still open for business too, by the way. =D
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Thu Jul 24, 2008 12:14 pm
Twit says...



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If you could do all the chapters, I'd be really grateful. If not, an overall impression would be just as nice. :D You have to scroll down the page to get to the part called "Drych-ddelwedd" and that's where it properly begins.
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Fri Jul 25, 2008 10:01 pm
ProfessorRabbit says...



Clo! *glomps* I have an "Other Fiction" piece that needs some critique love! Purdy please?

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