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This here, is something I need to hand in by midnight tonight. >.< It's really not 'romantic', though if I wasn't stuck with a limit of 1600 words it would have been. But anyways, if you can somehow get to it today, I would love your forever. Though even if you can't that's fine. =P

^_^ Thanks a lot!

Jamie - Done!
Valor - You're up next.

in my portfolio under dramatic poetry called "The Wind Spell" please and thankyou


---Jon---

Night Terrors

I have just posted this and wondered if I could get some reviews? Er... it's a bit longer than your preferred word count, but... I mean... it's exciting? Everyone says it is.

I'm really trying to focus on the horror in this piece. If you know anything about how to get my readers to be scared out of their pants, I need that advice.

-Jared

Valor, you're done! Wise, you're on the list.

BBB - I'll look at the story; I can't promise a line-by-line critique if its hugely long, but I'll try to point out anything that catches my eye, and give you my take on the overall piece.

wise - done.

BBB - I just checked out your story, and not only is it lengthy and posted in the Advanced Critiques section, but it's also in the dreaded 2nd person POV. I'll try to look it over, but I really can't make any promises.

I'm evil and haven't done BBB's yet. However, I've got two slots open for shorter stories, and three for ( structured ) poetry. Have at me!

I'm having at you. ^^

Keeping Time

Out of curiousity, why no HF? Er, because, this is posted in romantic, but it is set in the past, so. Oh, but it's less then 1,000 words, so if you truly hate the past, you shouldn't suffer much.

Merci and so forth!

I don't like reviewing historical fiction because, well, what I know about things from the past could fit into a shoebox. I can offer stylistic advice and fixes on mechanics, but I would completely overlook things like anachronisms and historical inaccuracies, simply because I wouldn't realize that they were wrong. I'm much more of a sci-fi gal. However, I'll definitely go take a look at your romance.

OMG, I'm so lazy!

Sorry, Suzanne, I forget to check this thread sometimes because it tends to fall down the page, and then I can't remember whether I had any reviews that needed doing, or if people were waiting, or what!

*dies*

I'm leaving the office here in a few minutes but I'm bumping this so I remember to review your story.

If anyone else wants a review, it may be slow in coming, but I'll do it.

Next chapter of Scavenger, please.

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Sure thing, TLG.

Hey, this is a story I started a while back and I wanted to know if I should drop it or continue. Please review. Just an all around review of you have time; character, plot, dialog, etc.

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Sorry, Ali, but it states clearly in my first post that I do not review fanfiction.

EDIT: And, now, I see that Suzanne's has been deleted. So, I guess it's just you, TLG. I've got your story pasted in a notebook file and intend to work on it throughout the day.

Thanks, Rabbit!