Thanks so much! And I shall critique your stuff for my contest shortly. But I haven't written in ages (well, not really, haha) so I've been putting off critiques for a bit. BUT! Now I shall focus solely on editing and critiquing.
I was informed that the character in this story was lacking characterization. I was also told that you were the person to turn to in matters like this. Any help that you could give me on making him more sophisticated would be appreciated. If you feel the need to tear into other parts of the story, go ahead and do that as well.
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