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Tue Dec 16, 2008 4:29 am
MADD94 says...



topic38723.html i need help and i will love you forever if you help.
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Tue Dec 16, 2008 6:38 am
niccy_v says...



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I'd love that to be reviewed
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Thu Dec 18, 2008 4:28 pm
Night Mistress says...



review please.

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"I love you," she whispered in his ear, before taking his mouth with her own.

~Elizzabeth Grey of Addicting Posion





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Thu Dec 18, 2008 6:01 pm
Kaylyn says...



Please Review this.

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As your pretty, so be wise,
Wolves may lurk in every guise.





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Thu Dec 18, 2008 6:21 pm
Theodorable says...



Okay, this may or may not be a challenge. :)
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Driver picks the music, shotgun shuts his cake hole. -Dean, Supernatural





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Sun Apr 16, 2023 6:53 am
DreamyAlice says...



Hello, I am one of the res crew mods here on YWS. This is a message just to inform you that I will lock and archive this thread as it is not active anymore. We have to archive and lock the inactive threads to keep the forum organized so no worries, if you'd like to reopen it at any point in the future please contact a current resources moderator, we would be happy to reopen it for you ^-^

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"The trouble with Borrowing another mind was, you always felt out of place when you got back to your own body, and Granny was the first person ever to read the mind of a building. Now she was feeling big and gritty and full of passages. 'Are you all right?' Granny nodded, and opened her windows. She extended her east and west wings and tried to concentrate on the tiny cup held in her pillars."
— Terry Pratchett, Discworld: Equal Rites