Sorry, if my review was too short because I think there are only small things to nitpick or to correct on, Puffy Cherry. It's because I think that piece was very well-written! Good job on that!
Anyone else?
"Life is a poem keep it in the present tense."-Sherrel Wigal
I think you forgot about what I asked in the chat =) Oh well, nevermind that. I've rewritten it anyway, so if you feel like it this time, there's the link =) Sinful Pride - Chapter 2
Have a nice day! Kyou
~Don't beg for things, do it yourself or else you'll never get anything~ -Formerly Shinda
Thomas Edison's last words were "It's very beautiful over there.” I don't know where there is, but I believe it's somewhere, and I hope it's beautiful. — John Green, Looking for Alaska
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