Hey Spike. ^_^ This 'Will Review for Food' section is where different people offer their critiquing services, so that they each have their own little business thread. If you would like to request a critique from someone, please reply in their specific thread with the link, like you did in lilymoore's thread.
Thank you!
"Let's eat, Grandma!" as opposed to "Let's eat Grandma!": punctuation saves lives.
By the sweat of your brow you will eat your food until you return to the ground, since from it you were taken; for dust you are and to dust you will return. — Genesis 3:19
