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Jon
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Thu Jul 10, 2008 4:41 pm
Jon says... · Thu Jul 10, 2008 4:41 pm
Anyway, what I will critique:
Mostly anything! :D



[u]What I specialize in
Dialougue
Emotion
Fantasy
Detail
Poetry
Realism
Structure

I'm looking to help!

---Jon---
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Thu Jul 10, 2008 7:25 pm
Snoink says... · Thu Jul 10, 2008 7:25 pm
*Moved to "Review for Food"*
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BigBadBear
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Sun Jul 13, 2008 5:36 am
BigBadBear says... · Sun Jul 13, 2008 5:36 am
Night Terrors

I have just posted this and wondered if I could get some reviews?
Just write -- the rest of life will follow.

Would love help on this.




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Jon
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Sun Jul 13, 2008 5:44 pm
Jon says... · Sun Jul 13, 2008 5:44 pm
done jared, it was great!!!!!!!

next???
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Jon
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Mon Jul 14, 2008 7:46 pm
Jon says... · Mon Jul 14, 2008 7:46 pm
ah hem *clears throat*, i said next!
.............. please :D

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Jon
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Tue Jul 15, 2008 11:57 pm
Jon says... · Tue Jul 15, 2008 11:57 pm
people!, i need things to critique, please
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Sleeping Valor
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Wed Jul 16, 2008 12:25 am
Sleeping Valor says... · Wed Jul 16, 2008 12:25 am
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^If you manage to review that today, I will be your bestest friend ever. :D But whenever you get to it is fine too. =P Thanks in advance!

^_^

Edit: Or no. *sees the story has been deleted* =P PM if you have something you'd like a review on. XD
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Thu Jul 17, 2008 7:31 pm
Firearris says... · Thu Jul 17, 2008 7:31 pm
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Thanks!
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[Firearris] 10:45 pm: askes the guard for the weasel!
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Jon
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Fri Jul 18, 2008 12:57 am
Jon says... · Fri Jul 18, 2008 12:57 am
done and done

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Sat Jul 19, 2008 9:45 pm
-Save-Ferris- says... · Sat Jul 19, 2008 9:45 pm
Do you want to do the first chapter of 'Magic Carpet Ride' for me? :D

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P.S Canaby Witches, finished it, forgot to PM you, I really like it. I think dialogue is your strongest point, it is all so natural :D
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Jon
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Mon Jul 21, 2008 7:06 pm
Jon says... · Mon Jul 21, 2008 7:06 pm
done, next please
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Mon Jul 21, 2008 8:20 pm
myfreindsavamp says... · Mon Jul 21, 2008 8:20 pm
I'm not hungrey. It looks like you are.

I said next!
:D

But here. This one you can burn.

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Jon
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Tue Jul 22, 2008 10:06 pm
Jon says... · Tue Jul 22, 2008 10:06 pm
done amber, next please

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