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Okay, so, to put it simply, I'm finally back for the long haul on YWS and I wanna get my review on.

Example Reviews
A small extract from my novel - miyaviloves
It Was Fun, Love - Tabithalillian
The Zipper of Your Pants - Nutty

Regulations:

I prefer short pieces (beings as I have a rather short attention span) and I will only do prose pieces, fiction or non-fiction but no poetry or scripts. Also, I'm fine with things that you would find in the Other Forum and the Other Fiction forum.


Just tell me:

*The name of your piece
*The word count
*A summary
*A link to your piece.


Thank you.

Bump *** I bump shamelessly

Hey lilymoore! Can you review this for me? It's kinda short, but you like that.

Title: Heaven on Earth

Word Count: 752

Link: Heaven on Earth

Summary: It's my musing on the view from my window. I sat up late one night and gazed down at my home town (I live on a mountain) and got thinking. I had to write about it, but it doesn't really have a storyline. And it has sentimental value to me, so I'd like to shine it up a bit.

Thanks a bunch! I might be back to ask for more!

~Sunny

Hey could you review this?

Title: How to Forget ch 1 (Romantic Fiction)
Word Count: 2,301
Link: topic44286.html

Summary: It's about a girl who's boyfriend leaves her and she doesn't really move on. A new guy asks her to his birthday party because friends tell him to, then she goes shopping with her best friend and sees him there. They buy clothes and all that good stuff. Not that interesting, but it's only the beginning of my book.

Thanks so much

All done. Any more takers.

Hi, well I wanted you to review this.

Title: Breakdown Prologue
Genre: Other Fiction
Word Count: 1,062
Summary: A young girl must return back home after rehab to deal with all her past mistakes. She worries about what people say because they all hate her because of what she did to her former best friend. I did one edit but I'm sure there's more I could do.
Link: topic44771.html

All finished. Please don't make me beg. I would love some more requests. Pleeeeaaaasssseee.

Okay, I feel like such a fool for bumping this up again, but, well, please someone give me work. Pretty please! *smiles hoping her begging hasn't made her look foolish though she knows it almost definately has*

NEED WORK!

please

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