Young Writers Society

Because I am in desperate need of points right now and wish to read something fun, it's your lucky day! I would be quite happy to review something interesting!

What I will review-

*Short stories
-Poetry (of all genres. But I try to stay away from the depressing ones)
-Romance (Please spare me the sex scenes. I am still but a wee, innocent little child! Other than that, I'm a sucker for anything romance)
-Fantasy (Preferably no vampire/werewolf tales. But I make exceptions)
-Historical Fiction (My most favorite time periods are anything from the 1800s to early 1900s, but I'll still crit stories in other times)
-Action/Adventure
-Horror (I LOVE ghost stories, keep that in mind [Ghost Hunters nerd])
-Art

What I will not review-

-Novels (I will very rarely review anything that comes in chapters. To be blunt, I generally only read novels if you are on my friend list. And it still doesn't guarantee that I'll read anything more than the first chapter)
-Sci Fi (Sorry, but spacey stuff hardly ever interests me)
-Fanfic ('Specially anything Harry Potter or Twilight related. Ew.)
-Scripts
-Song Lyrics
-Photography (I'm at a loss for that sort of thing.)

*Short stories can be under any of the genres in the "What I will review" list. Anything other that, I will not review.
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My reviews are in the middle of harsh and soft. I try to keep a balance, finding the things I love and finding the things that aren't so good. I generally focus more on the grammar/punctuation/sentence layout sort of thing because I'm a freak for that kind of stuff. But I still give you suggestions and whatnot for the actual writing aspect if I find it necessary.

For those of you who exchange critiques, my entries for Cal's Some Kind of Character Contest titled "Smoke Follows Beauty" could use some reviews. Each part can be read in no particular order, I think, so don't just review part one. Read whichever! I'll keep what I want critiqued updated. Here's the link to part one, and the rest you can find from there:

Smoke Follows Beauty

-Holly

I would looooooooooooove a Hollymiester critique on this. It would make me happy inside.

And sure. I'll read those ones for Cal's contest.

-Jared

Done!

Hey! I'd like a review on a poem of mine:
We're thinking about you

Not too long. Hope you can manage!

Thanks!

Done!

Hey there..
This is the sequel to my previous story posted in the action/adventure forum!
would be glad if you could critique it...
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thanks a ton in advance!!

Done!

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Thanks in advance!

http://www.youngwriterssociety.com/topic36307.html

Thankyouuuuu!!



XxxDo

Ps. Seriously: TEAR THIS STORY TO SHREDS IF YOU MUST! haha it's for a contest, so be harsch, please?

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