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TheCrimsonLady
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Sat Jun 21, 2014 2:05 am
TheCrimsonLady says... · Sat Jun 21, 2014 2:05 am
Sorceress: Chapter 7

I'd appreciate it if you could review this :). Thanks!!!
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Wed Jun 25, 2014 1:13 am
Snowery says... · Wed Jun 25, 2014 1:13 am
@Aurora99 I shall hopefully get to this by early July! I'm so sorry for the delay, but I have exams :( To make up for it I'll try and review your previous chapters as well :D
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Wed Jun 25, 2014 1:56 am
TheCrimsonLady says... · Wed Jun 25, 2014 1:56 am
Oh it's fine!!
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What really knocks me out is a book that, when you're all done reading it, you wish the author that wrote it was a terrific friend of yours and you could call him up on the phone whenever you felt like it. That doesn't happen much, though.
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