Magpie's review dungeon of death

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Welcome to the dungeon.

The reviews I will leave will not be nice and sugar coated. If you are looking for an honest opinion on your poetry or your song lyrics, this is the place.

I might suggest that you cut out entire limbs of your piece, or even rearrange its teeth. But you'll feel much better for it afterwards.

I will state it again: I will be brutally honest within these requested reviews. If you don't want that, don't request here.
"So many poems growing outta them they're practically a poet-tree"
Gringoamericano




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valley of a thousand winds - Please kill it. With fire, if necessary.
stay off the faerie paths



"The trouble with Borrowing another mind was, you always felt out of place when you got back to your own body, and Granny was the first person ever to read the mind of a building. Now she was feeling big and gritty and full of passages. 'Are you all right?' Granny nodded, and opened her windows. She extended her east and west wings and tried to concentrate on the tiny cup held in her pillars."
— Terry Pratchett, Discworld: Equal Rites