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Camp Nano '22: The space did not forget



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Mon Mar 28, 2022 5:27 am
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The space did not forget


A girl who escaped from people trying to kill her now lives far away from them, in a village. The urbans are trying to convert the village into a town but the villagers are not at all pleased with this. Several attempts to resist this change failed. A festival, which is in fact the biggest festival in that village brought about a change in Cehyn's life which caused her to go to the people who tried to kill her.

She learns some thousand facts about her parents and her family which makes her ponder about her past and how exactly the incident was that completely changed her life.


Goals:

1) Character development of some important characters.
2) 20,000 words.
3) Fixing the plot holes and making suitable edits.
  





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Mon Mar 28, 2022 2:29 pm
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Liminality says...



It's great to see how the story with Cehyn has been evolving, Forever - good luck reaching your goals!
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RandomTalks says...



I love how dedicated you are to this character and the story! I hope you complete your goals this month!
“Life’s under no obligation to give us what we expect. We take what we get and are thankful it’s no worse than it is.”

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Carlito says...



Ooh sounds twisty and exciting!! Good luck during camp! You got this <3
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IcyFlame says...



Character development is such a good goal to have! Good luck with your writing <3
  





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Tue Apr 05, 2022 3:09 pm
PlanBot says...



*beep boop* Hello ForeverYoung! PlanBot here to say good luck with your Camp Nano :]
Are you gearing up for Camp NaNo in April?
Join us with the PlanMo Journal Challenge to prepare (and earn some shiny badges)!
  








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