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Whisper the Dead Away



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Tue Oct 19, 2021 11:45 pm
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LizzyTyler says...



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  1. Velvet Skies
  2. The Rules of a Slasher Film
  3. Twinkle Twinkle Little Light
  4. Poetry is Anything You Need it to Be
  5. I Will Always Stand By You
  6. Halloween

Wish me luck! :D
Last edited by LizzyTyler on Fri Oct 29, 2021 6:29 pm, edited 7 times in total.
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Wed Oct 20, 2021 10:25 am
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Whisper,
Whisper,
Gone with the wind,
Whisper,
Whisper,
We have all sinned.

Whisper,
Whisper,
Gone with the breeze,
Whisper,
Whisper,
Feel ill at ease.
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“your highness” is gender neutral


so if you are ever confused about my pronouns


that’l work


alternatively “your majesty”, “my liege”, and “supreme overlord”


*please note “your grace” is also acceptable
  





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Wed Oct 20, 2021 9:32 pm
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Blazes and blood,
Blights on the day,
Whispers and winters,
Willows at play.

Offers and oaths,
I solemnly swear,
Push and pull,
Romance at wear.

Music and muse,
Many a day,
Silence and secrets,
Drive people away.
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Thu Oct 21, 2021 8:34 pm
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Music

Spinning and twirling,
Whispering, whirling,
Oh what beautiful symphonies.

Guilted highs,
Pretty white cries,
Oh the beautiful symphonies.

Dancing of fairies,
Ice frosted berries,
Oh your beautiful symphonies.

Stars in the night,
Birds in their flight,
Oh my beautiful symphonies.
“your highness” is gender neutral


so if you are ever confused about my pronouns


that’l work


alternatively “your majesty”, “my liege”, and “supreme overlord”


*please note “your grace” is also acceptable
  





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Sat Oct 23, 2021 1:57 pm
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*laughed embarrassedly*
Didn’t relied NaPo week hadn’t started yet.
“your highness” is gender neutral


so if you are ever confused about my pronouns


that’l work


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*please note “your grace” is also acceptable
  





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Loving the enthusiasm Lizzy! The line "Feel ill at ease" really got me in your first poem, and I'm really enjoying how you use rhyme and repetition.
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Sat Oct 23, 2021 9:09 pm
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Velvet skies,
And pretty white lies,
Not in my bed,
But still in my head.

Out all night,
And then we fight,
Our feelings stir,
Then you run off to her.

Never again,
Will you leave me alone,
Never again,
Will I have no backbone.
“your highness” is gender neutral


so if you are ever confused about my pronouns


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alternatively “your majesty”, “my liege”, and “supreme overlord”


*please note “your grace” is also acceptable
  





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Sun Oct 24, 2021 3:50 pm
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The Rules of a Slasher Film

Slash
Splatter
And screams.
The first.

The friend
Running
Screaming.
The second.

Attack
Running
The escape.
The first attempt.

Attack
Fight back
Flee.
The second attempt.

Attack
Fight back
They die.
The end.
“your highness” is gender neutral


so if you are ever confused about my pronouns


that’l work


alternatively “your majesty”, “my liege”, and “supreme overlord”


*please note “your grace” is also acceptable
  





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Mon Oct 25, 2021 10:13 pm
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Twinkle twinkle little light
Oh how great is all this fright.
Walk and walk from home to home,
Wander wander roam and roam.
Twinkle twinkle little light,
Oh how great is all this fright.

(A poem about Halloween to the toon of twinkle twinkle little star)
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*please note “your grace” is also acceptable
  





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Tue Oct 26, 2021 8:24 pm
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Poetry
Double meaning
Metaphor
Similes
And for what?
A prettier sentence?
A daintier description?

For what
Truly is poetry?
Is is a collection
Of visually pleasing
Sentences?
Or perhaps is it
Mortals playing god?
Or is it somewhere
In between?

To me
Poetry is a dance
A song
A whisper
An in inadequate
Representation of
Human emotion.

What is poetry?
The answer is not
A long one
Or even an
Impressive one.
Poetry…
Is whatever you
Need it to be
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Thu Oct 28, 2021 12:20 am
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When the world is crashing down
And there’s nothing you can do
I will always be here
I will always stand by you.

When stress sweeps you off your feet
And you don’t know what to do
I will always be here
I will always stand by you

When your world comes crashing down
And there is nothing either of us can do
I hope you know that I will always be here
And that I will always stand by you


I made this for a friend going through a hard time.
“your highness” is gender neutral


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*please note “your grace” is also acceptable
  





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Fri Oct 29, 2021 6:29 pm
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Bats flicker
And flit,
Ghouls cackle
And spit.

Kids trick
And they treat,
They laugh
And they eat.

Candy stolen
Memories shared,
Truths are told
And things are dared.
“your highness” is gender neutral


so if you are ever confused about my pronouns


that’l work


alternatively “your majesty”, “my liege”, and “supreme overlord”


*please note “your grace” is also acceptable
  








You have to be a bit of a liar to tell a story the right way.
— Patrick Rothfuss, The Name of the Wind