Love those images, Plume! "key-lime-in-the-summer green" was particularly vivid for me. I remember being like o.o when I first saw a picture of key lime pie, so that line reminded me of that. I also love all the repetition and the long images strung together with dashes - it makes it very recitable.
When I use caps I do not want you to read it like a little screech, I want you to read it like a 5,000 year old ogre with the strength of 10,000 men. — avianwings47
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