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Two Crows Watch from the Gallows Tree (part 18)



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Mon Nov 07, 2022 1:11 am
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“That’s because I’m a better speaker than you.” She turned down the hall and tried to hurry away even though it’d be the long way to her bedroom. She was done with him. With them. It always got so sour so fast.

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"From the fish mother to the fish death god." - lehmanf
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Mon Nov 07, 2022 1:13 am
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"Rana!" His face reddened and he marched after her. "How dare you! Come back here at once."
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Mon Nov 07, 2022 1:15 am
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She sped up. “Leave me alone!”

"u and rina are systematically watering down the grammar of yws" - Atticus
"From the fish mother to the fish death god." - lehmanf
"A fish stole my identity. I blame shady" - Omni
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"Come here this instant!" He jogged after her. "Now, or I'll find another whipping boy--I thought you'd outgrown them but obviously not."
"I’m thinking about the aurora borealis. You can’t tell if it really does exist or if it just looks like existing. All things are so very uncertain, and that’s exactly what makes me feel reassured." --Too-Ticky

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Mon Nov 07, 2022 1:20 am
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(Like the surrogate where another kid gets spanked instead of you?)

Rana hesitated, taking a few more strides away. But then the guilt overwhelmed her and she slowed, tensing, half-expecting him to whack her when he caught up. Best to just let him do whatever he wanted to do to her now. No point in dragging a third party into this. Even though she was reluctant to let him see that that threat would work. She didn’t want him to have ammo over her in the future.

"u and rina are systematically watering down the grammar of yws" - Atticus
"From the fish mother to the fish death god." - lehmanf
"A fish stole my identity. I blame shady" - Omni
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Mon Nov 07, 2022 1:22 am
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(Yeah)

He caught up to her, huffing and puffing. "You insolent little mongrel," he growled. "Apologize."
"I’m thinking about the aurora borealis. You can’t tell if it really does exist or if it just looks like existing. All things are so very uncertain, and that’s exactly what makes me feel reassured." --Too-Ticky

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Mon Nov 07, 2022 1:25 am
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(Nice. I haven’t thought of that concept in years haha but seems fitting for him)

She rolled her eyes and looked at him sourly. “Sorry.” Her tone didn’t sound very sorry at all.

"u and rina are systematically watering down the grammar of yws" - Atticus
"From the fish mother to the fish death god." - lehmanf
"A fish stole my identity. I blame shady" - Omni
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Mon Nov 07, 2022 1:28 am
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(My second grade teacher read us a book about a whipping boy once. It was pretty good)

He straightened, looking down his nose at her. "Recitations it is, then."
"I’m thinking about the aurora borealis. You can’t tell if it really does exist or if it just looks like existing. All things are so very uncertain, and that’s exactly what makes me feel reassured." --Too-Ticky

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Mon Nov 07, 2022 1:31 am
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(Nice! I wonder if it’s the same book I’m thinking of, tho I don’t remember the title for sure. But I was about that age)

“Oh, goody. Now you get to listen to me even more; your favorite.” Why couldn’t she just shut up?

"u and rina are systematically watering down the grammar of yws" - Atticus
"From the fish mother to the fish death god." - lehmanf
"A fish stole my identity. I blame shady" - Omni
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Mon Nov 07, 2022 1:33 am
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(It was just titled The Whipping Boy. It's by Sid Fleischmann.)

"If you think we'll be in the same carriage you've got another thing coming. Go clean up; be ready for tea."
"I’m thinking about the aurora borealis. You can’t tell if it really does exist or if it just looks like existing. All things are so very uncertain, and that’s exactly what makes me feel reassured." --Too-Ticky

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Mon Nov 07, 2022 1:37 am
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(Ah yep that’s the one!)

Thank gods for that one. That was the best news she’d heard all day — that she wasn’t going to have to share a carriage with this asshole for the terrible, pointless, stupid journey. But she couldn’t show relief. Not yet. He seemed the type to cut his own nose off to spite his face and she couldn’t risk changing his mind. “Yes, sir.” She saluted sarcastically and started to stride off again.

"u and rina are systematically watering down the grammar of yws" - Atticus
"From the fish mother to the fish death god." - lehmanf
"A fish stole my identity. I blame shady" - Omni
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Mon Nov 07, 2022 2:43 am
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Cairbry turned and stalked back toward Lia. "Insufferable," he muttered.
"I’m thinking about the aurora borealis. You can’t tell if it really does exist or if it just looks like existing. All things are so very uncertain, and that’s exactly what makes me feel reassured." --Too-Ticky

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Mon Nov 07, 2022 2:47 am
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She blushed and ducked her head. “I’m sorry she upset you, Papa. It was very rude of her.”

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"From the fish mother to the fish death god." - lehmanf
"A fish stole my identity. I blame shady" - Omni
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Mon Nov 07, 2022 2:51 am
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"Yes it was," he agreed. "She's very rude. Wild, like a peasant."
"I’m thinking about the aurora borealis. You can’t tell if it really does exist or if it just looks like existing. All things are so very uncertain, and that’s exactly what makes me feel reassured." --Too-Ticky

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Mon Nov 07, 2022 2:54 am
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“Very ungrateful,” Lia agreed. “You do so much for us.”


Rana blushed even more and hurried out of earshot, tearing up. How was she always the bad guy? No matter what? What had she done so wrong to end up with such an absolutely terrible father? She hurried to her room.

"u and rina are systematically watering down the grammar of yws" - Atticus
"From the fish mother to the fish death god." - lehmanf
"A fish stole my identity. I blame shady" - Omni
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