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The Hand That Mocked Them



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Fri Jun 17, 2022 3:42 am
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"I see. Please stir this until the mixture turns violet." He passed him a beaker and glass stir stick.
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Fri Jun 17, 2022 3:51 am
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He nodded quickly and stirred. "I just--" He hesitated again. "Homunculi can't possibly be sentient."
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Fri Jun 17, 2022 12:14 pm
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"And yet here you are." The liquid was turning an odd green color.
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Fri Jun 17, 2022 1:24 pm
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"But I can't be sentient. It's against the law for sentient beings to participate in unpaid labor, and that's all homunculi are used for. So we must not be sentient."
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Fri Jun 17, 2022 1:31 pm
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Kivvien chuckled. "A lot of things are against the law, including you being made to begin with, and yet here you are. I have pointed out many times that you should be paid for your labor, yet you argued."
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Fri Jun 17, 2022 1:49 pm
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"Because I'm just a homunculus. What would I need money for?"
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Fri Jun 17, 2022 2:00 pm
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"There are other forms of compensation."
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"Like what?"
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Fri Jun 17, 2022 4:17 pm
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"Well, just about anything, really. Better accommodations, services you'd like performed for your own benefit. You can barter just about anything you'd like for your labor."
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Fri Jun 17, 2022 4:18 pm
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"But that's not my right."
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Fri Jun 17, 2022 8:01 pm
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"You just said it was. You're sentient, so it is."
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Fri Jun 17, 2022 10:39 pm
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"But I can't be sentient," he protested.
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Sat Jun 18, 2022 2:27 am
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"Why not?" he asked, just to entertain the stubborn humunculus.
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Sat Jun 18, 2022 3:24 am
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"Because I'm a homunculus. We're not sentient beings!"
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Sat Jun 18, 2022 4:07 am
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Kivvien sighed. "You very clearly are. Homunculi are rare, hardly a thing is known about their variety and possibility. Maybe you are the first to be sentient, but you are."
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