Something shivers down my spine and I nearly pull back, tightening my grip on Rayah for different reasons. What the hell is wrong with me? Drafts only I can feel? S'stupid. Get a hold of yourself.
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I smile and shake my head at her, "That's not what I meant, but good. Why don't we get something to eat?"
I'm never what I like I'm double sided And I just can't hide I kind of like it When I make you cry 'Cause I'm twisted up, twisted up Inside
Writing your name can lead to writing sentences. And then the next thing you'll be doing is writing paragraphs, and then books. And then you'll be in as much trouble as I am!
No, it's not that you didn't succeed. You accomplished a lot, but, if you want to touch people, don't concentrate so much on rhyme and metre. Think more about what you want to say instead of how you're saying it. — LCDR Geordi La Forge