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Journey to the Butter Dragon



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Mon Jan 16, 2023 9:36 am
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Sir Edward nodded his head solemnly, which left his oversized helmet rocking back and forth. "We might start here," he said, drawing an 'X' in a spot that marked the small farming village of Pie, right outside the capital city. This was where the Cavorting Croissant was! And it was also small enough that the Pastry Clerics - and Sir Edward shuddered at the thought of them - would be unlikely to find them.
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Tue Jan 17, 2023 6:13 am
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"Excellent," Crissy declared. "Let's leave immediately!"

Jeeves, returning with the king's saddle, coughed. "It'll be a few more minutes before the horses are prepared, my lady."

"Oh. Well, as soon as we are able, then." She nodded sagely. "Anyhow, have you all brought your weapons, or does anyone need to pick up supplies?"
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Mon Jan 23, 2023 1:45 pm
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Sir Edward scrunched up his bushy brows. Weapons? Was he going to need a weapon? He was never a combatant, though he could swing a broomstick or two when he needed it. Perhaps some of the others might need to visit the blacksmith instead.

As for supplies, he'd brought his whole stash with him on his two horses. They had come from his small estate. He had brought three week's supply of ice-enchanted dough. If they met a fire mage along the way, they would be able to defrost and bake the dough to scrumptious bready perfection. Other than that, he had a week's supply of biscuits, which could be eaten right away.
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"I believe we have sufficient material to engage in combat. Don't we my lady?" asked Sabrina.
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Mon Feb 13, 2023 7:35 pm
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Sir Edward's eyes widened. Already? It looked like Lady Sabrina and Lady Marion were very prepared for this journey!
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Aeron nodded. "I've come prepared as well and can leave as soon as needed."

Sir Edward seemed uncomfortable with the mention of weapons, though, so he decided to err on the side of caution and not mention the small armory he had in his saddlebags outside.

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Sat Mar 11, 2023 2:28 am
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"Wonderful." Crissy patted the sword at her side. "I'm skilled in hand-to-hand combat as well as swordfighting. Now then..." She trailed off as she spotted a messenger boy running in through a side door.

"The horses are ready!" he announced to the king.
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Sun Mar 12, 2023 8:17 am
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"Excellent!" the king said in a booming voice. He hopped off of his toast-shaped throne and strode towards the doors. "Onward, then - to the village of Pie!"

Sir Edward followed behind him. Outside, six saddled horses were waiting.
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"Does my lady want to mount up first?" asked Sabrina as they walked out, talking in the horses. They all seemed to be rather friendly steeds.
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“It’s my job to assist my lady, should she need it.” Marion held out her hand.
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Wed Mar 15, 2023 10:49 am
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Sir Edward sent his one of his own horses away with the stable boy who worked on his estate. He transferred some of his supplies to a horse supplied by the king. The horse regarded him curiously as he huffed and puffed and stocked the wagon with ice-enchanted dough. It gave the feather on his helmet a sniff.

He patted the horse's snout. "His Grace's horses are fine and strong. They have a weakness for apples, but not so much for pie crust."

He was speaking from experience.
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Aeron silently surveilled the horses and then approached a beautiful dapple gelding. He looked at the stable boy holding him. "What's his name?"

"Blueb."

Aeron raised an eyebrow. "...Blueb?"

"Yeah, like blueberry... but without the 'erry'."

"Why not just Blue?"

"Why not just respect his name?"

Aeron was quiet for a moment, then inclined his head. "Very well. Blueb it is. I'll take him."

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"What is the name of this one?" Sir Edward asked, patting the horse that had sniffed his helmet.

The stable boy replied: "R-a-s-p-b-e."

"Like Raspberry without the '-rry'?"

"No, like 'raspy', but without the 'y'."

Raspbe whinnied and indeed his voice sounded very raspy.
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“And this one?” Chrissy asked, pointing at a horse with cherry blossoms braided into her mane.

“Herry."

"Harry?"

"Herry, with an 'e.' Or like 'cherry' without the 'c.'"

Chrissy looked at the horse, then shrugged. "Sure, why not."

She hopped into Herry's saddle and turned her towards the open gate. Just beyond it, a dusty path led off to the village of Pie.

"Is everyone ready?" the king asked.
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The king strode out further. His horse was the magnificent mare with a mane the colour of butter. He would not ride on the saddle, oh no. He would sit in the carriage behind the horse, which was sturdy and prosaic, certainly not kingly at all, so as to disguise himself from ne'er-do-wells.

"Knights, you must beware," he said in a kingly voice. "A force within the kingdom has its knife and fork positioned over the Butter Dragon's magic as we speak. They are very likely to interfere."

Then, in a much less kingly, whispering voice, he named said force: "The Pastry Clerics."

He let a moment pass, just to be dramatic. Then, he hopped into the carriage.
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