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Convicing Explosion



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Sat Dec 30, 2006 6:55 pm
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deleted6 says...



Okay my problem is how can i write a convicing explosion? If anyone can help please try. Thanks in advance for any help.
We get off to the rhythm of the trigger and destruction. Fallujah to New Orleans with impunity to kill. We are the hidden fist of the free market.
We are the ink, we are the quill.
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Sat Dec 30, 2006 7:05 pm
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misspriss says...



What kind of explosion? What was it caused by? What are the surrounding?

Here are some things to think on...

What do your see? Spare tires flying through the air while at the same time melting from the heat?

What sounds do you hear? Deafening screams?

What do you smell? The stench of acid?

What do you feel? Extreme pain as you get ground into the asphalt?

What do you taste? Smoke?

Focus on the five senses, and I hope I helped because I'm not QUITE sure what you wanted...
  





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Sat Dec 30, 2006 7:12 pm
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It a memory that i'm doing and he can't hear anything. When a bomb goes off normally your hearing affected. It a memory so it already happen he just remembering it.
We get off to the rhythm of the trigger and destruction. Fallujah to New Orleans with impunity to kill. We are the hidden fist of the free market.
We are the ink, we are the quill.
[The Ink And The Quill (Be Afraid) - Anti-Flag]
  





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