Young Writers Society

This Game Life

Verse 1:
Whispers of so many that sorrow
Exchanged with each blink of an eye
Hoping for a tomorrow
A chance for a renewed life

The sound of a chance for salvation
Gets barely a turning head
Leaning on their own expectations
By running and hiding instead

Chorus:
We all just don't know
How this game, Life, goes
Lets bring our max
Ten times fold

The unrecognized
Shall be put in sight
Lets stop wasting our time
Before we reach the end of our...

Lives, lives

The end of our

Lives, lives...

Verse 2:
So many broken promises
And infinite unspoken words
Are what causes separation
And temptations of war to stir

We think we all have the answers
Then why are we still making prayers
For this horror to finally end
Of which we are the creators?

Chorus:
We all just don't know
How this game, Life, goes
Lets stop the follishness,
Reach the unknown

The unrecognized
Shall be seen with non-blind eyes
Lets stop wasting our time
Before we reach the end of our...

Lives, lives

The end of our

Lives, lives...

Bridge:
Are we too convinced by our thoughts
That there's no point in even trying?
Or are we too busy worrying about ourselves?
Not bothering to look around
What is this world we have found?
It's not to late to care now
But if we wait, then it will be

We all just don't know
How this game, Life, goes
Lets bring our max
Ten times fold

The unrecognized
Shall be put in sight
Lets stop wasting our time
Before we reach the end of our...

We all just don't know
How this game, Life, goes
Lets stop the foolishness
Reach the unknown

The unrecognized
Shall be seen with non-blind eyes
Lets stop wasting our time
Before we reach the end of our

Lives, lives

The end of our lives, lives

We cannot wait!

Hi this was good! First of all you've mispelled foolishness. I like the fact that you have to concentrate to get the meaning- you have a great way of hiding your meaning behind complexity although to be honest your words sound really nice even when i'm a little lost on the meaning ( im a bit tired).. they flow really well! To me, your bridge is your weakness. A bridge is meant to be the defining part where you explain the theme, but I think you've already done this in your verses so in my opinion I think a shorter bridge maybe just one or two lines would be better. But in saying that I haven't heard the song so maybe the bridge works really well! This song is great though so well done and keep writing! - Rachel

Hi there!

These are some really great lyrics! It's refreshing to read the lyrics people post here on YWS because they're real. The types of songs that are popular now don't really have any meaning to them. Here and there you might actually hear a song that has a good meaning (or if you listen to country). These lyrics are great. It's a great message and you did a good job getting the message across to your audience. This flowed well and I could put it to my own beat, my own melody while I was reading it. I liked it!

Keep writing!