This is a really good poem! I love the message it sends. And I didn't see anything wrong with it. Good job! My favorite part was the entire last verse. It seemed to flow so smoothly. I love it!!! Keep writing!
No more Hiding away No more Changing me no more having fear No more No more No more Tears
I'm the author of my own life. Unfortunately I'm writing in pen. Mistakes I make can not be erased, the only option is to turn the page and start a new chapter. <3
I'm single because God is busy writing the best love story. <3 VuzzyCat
This was pretty well written, but I kind of would like to know why the person has all of these emotions. It's really vague as to why this person feels this way. Perhaps, I missed something, but it just seems that someone is randomly saying they will not hideaway again...but from what?
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