Young Writers Society

So my dorky randomness strikes again. And yes, this is dedicated to our four awesomesauce Review Teams! And I hope this is pretty (and epic!) enough as an inspiration for you guys to review something! This is just for fun! Happy singing!

~Yuri



We Can Do This!


Buddy you're a boy make a big yell
Reviewing here and there, gonna collect some cool points
Team Nudibranch!
Team Bamboozle!
They are so awesome, let’s get ready and start
Singing


We can, we can do this!
We can, we can do this!


Buddy open up, get a coffee
Helping those kids 'bout grammar, and makin' their day
You got the full energy
Rememberin’ the day
Someone has helped you along the way
Singing


We can, we can do this!
We can, we can do this!


Buddy you're a good man young man
Turn on your computer and set your eyes on the screen
Team CSI!
Power Rangers!
Wavin’ YWS flag all over the place
Singing


We can, we can do this!
We can, we can do this!

Oh good grief, I love this. I'm not entirely sure about the rhythm on parts of it, but I'm having a hard time matching it up to the original, since the words are so different.

Seriously, this should be our theme song. Like, it should be on each team's page permanently, or just on the page for the team stats.


ohyeah-- YWS, though the shortest way to say this site's name, has one too many syllables because of the W. X3 Maybe just "our"? Or "Nate's". :3 Since it is his site. ;3

Also, darn you, Yuriiko! You have, like, no grammar mistakes. At all. Now what am I supposed to say? ;3


^
(Take that as compliment. ;3)

...I'm using the ;3 smiley waaaay too much. x3

I can just see a group of YWSers marching with a banner held high above their head, singing this song and....... typig on their laptops? Hmm...... the picture is now changing. :p (I'll work on it. Just don't expect me to draw it. :p)

So, this was really good. I love parodies-- they're so much fun! ^_^

Thanks for putting this out here.

helloo yuriiko!!
I love this! that's all I am going to say yuss *nods*
there's nothing to criticize anyway XD

HAHAHAHAHA!!!!

I like the content enough to almost not comment on how the syllables don't actually work with the song.

But look what I've done. The syllables don't actually work with the song. Not that anybody really cares, because it's just for fun.

Other than that, I have nothing. If it means a lot to you, rewording the sentences shouldn't be too hard. Different adjectives. Not as many "yeah"s or more "yeah"s. Et cetera.

This is short. Keep writing. That is all.

Thank you guys for your reviews! I really appreciate it and going to take those into account. I really need to work on my syllabication. 83


Thanks again!

I like this. I think it's great. I also like the subject and how you fit in all the reviewing team names as well. That's all really. Keep writing (and reviewing)!

Haha, oh dear. How are you supposed to critique something like this?

This is very, very, very dorky. And I kind of adore it for that!

Just one thing:

Buddy wake up, avoid doing nothing
Open your eyes and your mind all free
Team CSI!
Power Rangers!
Wavin’ YWS banner all over the place
Singing

I don't quite know what you mean by opening eyes and minds being free. I mean, I think what you're talking about is actually reviewing and not procrastinating from reviewing, but I am not quite sure. In any case, I would probably play around with this verse and see if you can make it better. It's definitely the weakest verse of the entire song, so you can probably fix it. Also, I would love to see that verse centering more about the reviewing aspect and less of what it's... trying to say right now. Did I mention that it was a little confusing?

As far as Karaoke goes? I'll avoid that, LOL.

Anyway, nice poem! Very dorky, but that's part of the charm. Also, I enjoyed how you enjoyed the four teams. Go us!

Yuri,

This may be random and if I'm honest, slightly strange but never give up on your writing. This has just lifted my spirits completely. My studying is a pain in the neck at the minute and I'm up to high doe, meaning I'm servely stressed.

So thank you deary. This is geniues and lovely. It really shows a team effort and that there's no tough feelings between the teams.

GOOO TEAM CSI!

Whooop...!

Kagi x

This is great song! Ha, I lol'd. The only thing I can critique is the amount of private jokes.... it makes no sense if you don't get it. Anyway, good work. Every site's gotta have a song, you've just made YWS's.

i really really like this song.....really