Young Writers Society

Verse 1:
She says she's fine/
but I know she's lyin'/
'cause you can't be fine/
with that look in your eyes/
but she'll never tell you otherwise/

Chorus:
She's as brave as a soldier/
but even soldiers need to hold somebody's hand/
she likes to take things slow/
but sometimes you have to run as fast as you can/
and when her world could be brighter/
yeah, I know she's a fighter/
but she's a fighter worth fighting for

Verse 2:
Her heart's on her sleeve/
but still you don't see/
that she's falling apart/
she's been from the start/
but you tell yourself otherwise/

Chorus

Bridge
So won't you fight for her heart/
and let her know she stands apart/
from every other girl in your world/
and she's the only girl worth fighting for

Chorus

Fight for her (x2)

This is beautiful I love!!! I love the emotion you put into this. It makes it feel so alive and thrilling. The emotion in this is very easily seen which is awesome. I hope to read more of your works when I have time. Good luck and Happy Writing!!!! Keep up the good work and I'll be sure to review more. Promises!!!
Soulkana<3

Thank you I try to create a personal connection with each of my songs, so they actually mean something. Thanks for the review!

Did you intend for the "\" to be in the song? Other than that I thought it was an okay song except for the parts that mention being like a soilder...it's just comes off awkard to me.