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Guardians At Night



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Tue Mar 15, 2011 5:15 am
Maddy says...



Since today it costs squat to post something, I thought I'd share this with you all. It's not the best work I've done, so have it at, please :)


Look up at the sky,
Do you see the stars,
Do you see tonight?
Look up at the stars,
Are they shining bright?
Do they see you cry?



Smile now and watch them glowing light,
For they’re guardians at night.



I know you’ve lost her near,
Your tears are from the soul,
But listen to me, as I make my speech,
As I’ve got something to say:



There’s no telling if time will heal,
The pain you feel, if at all,
But promise you’ll be brave,
And live their legacy,
Show them you’re strength and beauty,
I know you will, wait and see,
Promise me your bravery,
And live their legacy.



Smile now and watch them glowing light,
For they’re guardians at night.



Let me hold your face,
And let me grace eyes;
Pretty as a sunrise.
Though they hold sadness,
And show misery,
One day they’ll be free.



I know you’ve lost her near,
Your tears are from the soul,
But listen to me, as I make my speech,
As I’ve got something to say:



There’s no telling if time will heal,
The pain you feel, if at all,
But promise you’ll be brave,
And live their legacy,
Show them you’re strength and beauty,
I know you will, wait and see,
Promise me your bravery,
And live their legacy.



Smile now, smile now,
Glowing light, shining light,
Guardians, they’re guardians,
At night-



There’s no telling if time will heal,
The pain you feel, if at all,
But promise you’ll be brave,
And live their legacy,
Show them you’re strength and beauty,
I know you will, wait and see,
Promise me your bravery,
And live their legacy.



Oooh, oooh, they’re shining bright,
Oooh, guardians at night.
-If at first you don't succeed, then skydiving definitely isn't for you!
-"Careful with that light at the end of the tunnel, it might be another train coming."

This awesome post bought to you by me. :)
  





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Tue Mar 15, 2011 5:28 pm
lele253isme says...



I haven't dealt with the loss of a person only the loss of a pet. And I held that pet dearly to my heart. He was the best, and I really missed him when he died. I was really sad and not happy and i wished that he could've had little bunnies of himself. These lyrics captures what I felt. And it is really hard to capture it so good job.
  








Being a hero doesn't mean you're invincible. It just means that you're brave enough to stand up and do what's needed.
— Rick Riordan, The Mark of Athena