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The song of my life



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Mon Mar 14, 2011 2:27 pm
Prats says...



♪♫
I can hear the music,
Don't know where it’s coming from.
There’s a strange feeling
of déjà vu in this sweet song.
My heart seems to know
The lyrics and the tune.
I’m swaying with the flow,
My lips start to croon.

I take in the rhythm of the pleasant breeze,
Seems like every moment is a new musical piece.

BRIDGE:
Seems like all the melodies
have been fused into one.


CHORUS:
The chords are close to perfect,
better than I’d ever visioned.
Yeah, in the song of my life.
It’s so lovely, what a sight!
(Yeah, in the song of my life.
it’s so lovely, what a sight!)
Sometimes it’s sunshine, sometimes it’s rain
in my ever surprising life.
When I feel stumped, I start all over again
and finally get the notes right.
The words are simply great,
and everything is in it’s place.
Nothing sounds so sweet,
no other song or it’s beat.
Because, this-is-the-song... of my life... (of my life)



Each move I make,
is a chord of my song;
And every single mistake
is a note sung wrong.
Life seems a sweet melody,
I need to keep myself in tune;
have to try to listen to the music,
even in one flower’s bloom.

Bridge:
I take in the rhythm of the pleasant breeze,
seems like every moment is a new musical piece.


Chorus:
The chords are close to perfect,
better than I’d ever visioned.
Yeah, in the song of my life.
It’s so lovely, what a sight!
(Yeah, in the song of my life.
it’s so lovely, what a sight!)
Sometimes it’s sunshine, sometimes it’s rain
in my ever surprising life.
When I feel stumped, I start all over again
and finally get the notes right.
The words are simply great,
and everything is in it’s place.
Nothing sounds so sweet,
no other song or it’s beat.
Because, this-is-the-song... of my life... (of my life)


It seems like the song of my life, is on the dot. (love it a lot)
I just feel I have to give it all, that I’ve got. (my best shot)
Try to make it better,
not let my dream shatter,
And get lost in this song...
Make the chorus louder,
become better and stronger,
And get lost in this song,
Yeah, get lost... in this song...


The chords are close to perfect,
better than I’d ever visioned.
Yeah, in the song of my life.
it’s so lovely, what a sight!
(Yeah, in the song of my life.
it’s so lovely, what a sight!)
Nothing sounds so sweet,
no other song or it’s beat.
Yeah, the song of my life!!!
♪♫
(:I'm going to live my life, or die trying... :)
  





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Tue Mar 15, 2011 5:34 pm
lele253isme says...



I like these lyrics, the song of my life. You should really make it into a real song. Like, does it have a rhythm? Because I am sure with the right beat and the right singer it could become great. keep writing, lyrics, too, and I'll keep reading them. Really, I will. But maybe not everyday.
  








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