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Fri Feb 11, 2011 2:46 pm
Jashael says...



The vid you're all been waiting for...

...or maybe not. :lol:

Anyway, here it goes...

Before you read on, listen to the song HERE while watching the epic faces of our YWSers. LOL I wanted more people to be in it. But since I've procrastinated this project enough, I had to rush the video.

Spoiler! :
SPECIAL THANKS for the following YWSers (for their photos):

baywolf25
Skins
Whisperer
Flower~Child
Warrior Princess
Tigersprite
Kitty15
ScarletteRose
Spitfire
ultraviolet
borntobeawriter
Yuriiko
PinkShearwater
Persephoneia
icepriness
Flower~Child
VitaminCakes
Day
Bondgirl007
Shubs!
jolene XD

.....who else I missed? I'm sleepy. *snores*


A SIMPLE LOVE SONG

by JASH BAGABALDO


I’m making it seem like you’re forgettable to me
When there’s not even a minute without me thinking of you
There’s something from you that I really wanna reach
(It’s your heart)
And I know I’m being impulsive to move

I’m still having second thoughts today
'Cause there’s just ain’t a thing not even one
For me to feel this way
Are you worth it?
...worth to be desperate upon?

This melody’s stuck in my head
These words that I have never said
Are all that I know
And I can’t seem to let go
For now I’m just too occupied
By things I can’t explain and deep inside
I hope I won’t look like a fool
But I’m just so in love with you

I’d laugh at your face every time that you try
To throw everyone your hilarious smile
I fell for
I won’t get caught uneasy by your side
So nobody could tell that I keep wishing you were mine

Just give me a quick stare
And you’ll remain a clueless guy
You may think that I don’t care
But I do
If you just lock your eyes on mine

This melody’s stuck in my head
These words that I have never said
Are all that I know
And I can’t seem to let go
For now I’m just too occupied
By things I can’t explain and deep inside
I hope I won’t look like a fool
But I’m just so in love with you

I’m more than a half-page down*
Don’t wanna see you around
For awhile
'Cause I don’t wanna get too close to you
Someday I might just open up
Though I know this song ain’t enough
I’m afraid to know what’s true

This melody’s stuck in my head
These words that I have never said
Are all that I know
And I can’t seem to let go
For now I’m just too occupied
By things I can’t explain and deep inside
I hope I won’t look like a fool
But I’m just so in love with you

Don’t wanna wait for this to end
'Cause I’m definitely sure that I’ll regret
Chances come and go
I need you badly to know
That for now I’m just too occupied
By your looks, your laughs, and your charming smiles
I hope that I won’t look like a fool
But I’m just a girl that’s so in love…
…with you!

And I hope you'll learn to sing along
Flow with the harmony of this simple love song... ♥






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I wrote this when I was fourteen. And well... the song will speak for itself. I don't wanna update it or anything. It's "a simple love song"... so yeah. I wanted to leave it in its simple form...

*this is probably a weird line, but for me, it kind of means... well, I was writing the song, and I was shocked of how long the song was becoming -- I was half-page down a yellow bond paper, plus my writing was small. So yeah, it's kind of random. But as I said, I don't wanna edit anything. And it's just one line. :P

I think the most meaningful line for me here is... This melody’s stuck in my head. Because it's so true. I had the melody first and it got stuck, and then the happening became a line. Plus it reminds me of my innocence a couple of years ago. LOL So yeah...

Thank you so much for reading, and/or listening. :D I hope you liked it!
And don't forget to LIKE it if you do! :D

If you wanna hear other songs from me, just follow the page Sol made: here. Thanks! :D

And oh...

.o♥ Happy Valentines ♥o.


Everyone who responded to me (whether you're in the vid or not) will get gifts from me. :D SPREAD THE LOOOOOOOOOOVE.

Spoiler! :
Sorry for the poor audio quality.
Last edited by Jashael on Wed Feb 16, 2011 2:52 am, edited 13 times in total.
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Fri Feb 11, 2011 3:13 pm
Yuriiko says...



Oh my Jash!

This is awesome, I tell you. At first I didn't know why you were going to take my profile picture and it was quite a surprise when I just saw mine in your video. Anyways, the lyrics complements well with the month of hearts. I'm not sure if there's something wrong with the lyrics and I don't even think this is a review.

*high fives*

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Fri Feb 11, 2011 5:37 pm
Kagi says...



This is great Jashy,

I really enjoyed it. Your lines were meaningfull.

My favourite was the video thingy. Now I want to know who is who.
I guess I'm too curious for my own good. Some people are real posers. I'm thinking thats skinsy but I'll have to find out somehow.

Makes mind up to stalk the photo's

Well done Jashy.
On line bugged me a teeeny bit,

I’m making it seem like you’re forgettable to me


It doesn't really make that much sense. Forgettable to me? I'm not even sure what your trying to say. Is it-I'm trying to make it seem like you're easy to foget or something along those lines?

I know you dont really want to edit but I just wanted to point that out.

Good job with the video. It was my total fave.
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Fri Feb 11, 2011 5:39 pm
Ranger Hawk says...



Beautiful, Jash! Loved the video, it was wonderfully put together. Happy Valentines! :D
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Sat Feb 12, 2011 12:16 am
Jashael says...



Thank you so much guys! :D

Kaka, I'll put up their names, and let you know.

Sisters, thanks! I hope you liked it. ;)
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Sat Feb 12, 2011 5:39 am
Jenthura says...



Awesomeness! What sort of crowd were you performing before? :D
Seeing all those YWS'ers was kinda weird, they certainly aren't like I imagined them.
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Sat Feb 12, 2011 11:40 am
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Kind of crowd? :\ A decent one, I guess. L-)

I know right? HAHA....
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Sat Feb 12, 2011 12:09 pm
MiaParamore says...



You missed...ME? Awesome song, and wow, YWS-ers are prettier people than anyone I know. <3 Happy Valentine's Day to all here, and hope you have it the best. :D
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I might have to bend it back
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Next time you point a finger
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Sat Feb 12, 2011 12:19 pm
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Thanks, Shubs... and what do you mean by I missed you? :lol: You were at the last two lines. It was perfect there. LOL Holding that mic and stuff. HAHAHA
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Sat Feb 12, 2011 12:51 pm
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Haha, no I meant the list. I thought you were asking for that. :P
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Sat Feb 12, 2011 1:43 pm
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I saw my picture and thought to myself, Ah, okay. lol Nice song, by the way. :) Not the best audio quality though. The video was nicely put together too. :)
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Sat Feb 12, 2011 1:53 pm
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Oh my god, Jashie.

I don't even.

This song is pretty good by itself already, but with the pics of tons of YWS-ers inside the video, I'm completely mindblown right now and I can't even form a rational thought so.

Good song is good, the sky is blue, bad audio is bad, Ice fails at reviewing, etc. *likes*

Shrubbery wrote:YWS-ers are prettier people than anyone I know.


I know, right? :P

Happy [early] Valentine's Day, everyone! ♥

P.S: Where is Skins in the video, anyway? I'm guessing she's the girl at 1:23.
you'll never find another sweet little girl with sequined sea foam eyes
ocean lapping voice, smile coy as the brightest quiet span of sky
and you're all alone again tonight; not again, not again, not again.
and don't it feel alright, and don't it feel so nice? lovely.


  





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Sat Feb 12, 2011 2:21 pm
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Sorry for the poor audio quality. Oh, please don't remind me... I've forgiven them... LOL :D

Icy, the blue eye at the "just give me a quick stare" is Skins'. :D
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Sat Feb 12, 2011 6:01 pm
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I love it Jash!! I think my face is somewhere around 2:00. :D I 'EEEeep'-ed when I saw it!
Everyone looks lovely and your song is magnificent!
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Sat Feb 12, 2011 9:26 pm
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ZOMG, I <3 this, Jashy.

I like people not knowing who I am... You were actually aloud to have my name by the picture of me in the video, but I obviously forgot to tell you... :lol: I like it not being there now though. It makes people guess who I am. Even if the picture you chose of me made me cringe... xD I look funny in it.

Basically, Jash, you rock. :P
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