Okay, here's the first complete song I wrote (sometimes I grab a paper and just write a verse but never complete it).
It fits in the pop-rock genre and is something Avril Lavigne might sing.
My ill-fated crush on someone inspired me to write this song, after i realized that it will never be (*sob* *sob*).
So here is the lyrics to You're Gone, and I hope you'll like it.
Verse1:
Getting through the day; Used to be okay,
(I was with you)
I thought it was chemistry; How it worked between you and me
The sparks used to flash so real; Was it us? Is it how I feel?
I made up mind, I was waiting for you
We weren't each other's half; But though you made me laugh
Your heart was somewhere else
I knew it couldn't be
Chorus:
You're gone; I walked away from you
There's nothing you could do;
We could never be; So now I'll say ,"so long"
I was lying to myself; But you're picture's still on my shelf
I guess I haven't gotten over you, baby
Verse 2:
Caught up between two sides; What's wrong and right
(But I can't choose)
Baby if you only knew; What I'd give to be with you
You reeled me; To bad you didn't feel me
Well if you'll treat me the way you treated her; Then I don't give a damn see you later
Chorus:
You're gone; I walked away from you
There's nothing you could do;
We could never be; So now I'll say ,"so long"
I was lying to myself; But you're picture's still on my shelf
I guess I haven't gotten over you
Bridge:
It couldn't go on like this
My head was spinning; You were winning
You were pinning after her
So I yanked myself outta this madness; I can breath I finally made it!
I'm gone; I ran away from home;
And now I'm all alone; I'm only a girl
And please tell me that you
Miss me as much as I do;(Do you?)
I guess there's still a little love for you
But I'm out of this mess/shit, it's true
And you're the person I wont need
Chorus:
You're gone; I walked away from you
There's nothing you could do;
We could never be; So now I'll say ,"so long"
I was lying to myself; But you're picture's still on my shelf
I guess I haven't gotten over you, baby
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So that's my song. By the way, any thing in brackets means that it's preformed by backing vocals. Yes, I even thought about the back vocals.
Anyway tell me what you think, and how much would you rate, and if you think it'll have any future.
Thanks.
Maisoon
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