Young Writers Society

I can’t believe,
You’d do a thing like that to me.
You cast me,
Off as someone who is not worthy.
You’ll never see,
The side of me that’s actually worth knowing.

And now I’m free…
Free from all the bullshit, pain,
You’re so annoying.
I’m so over this,
Don’t come around.
Unless you’re finally man enough to say sorry.

I can’t believe,
You never took time to talk to me.
You just said,
Sorry dear I don’t think that’s it’s working.
Silly me!
I was wrong to think that you were really trying.
I guess that you just really like lies.

And now I’m free…
Free from all the bullshit, pain,
You’re so annoying.
I’m so over this,
Don’t come around.
Unless you’re finally man enough to say sorry.

-Guitar-

I did believe,
That this time would actually b e different.
I did believe,
That we were done with drama, lies
But it’s all the same story.

I can’t believe,
I wasted all this time on you.
Crying over what you put me through.
I don’t need your apologies,
Your promises, or sympathy,
I’ve never been more sure of anything.
And now I’m finally done wasting my life.

And now I’m free…
Free from all the bullshit, pain,
You’re so annoying.
I’m so over this,
Don’t come around.
Unless you’re finally man enough to say sorry.

I’m free…
I’m free….
I’m free….
I’m free….

Hey Carlito, I really liked your song! However there are a few things I would change though. Such as I don't think you had enough of a story,like were the two people in the song in a relationship or is the main character just mad that the guy wouldn't give her any attention? Also what did he do that he needed to apologize for?The title finally free makes me think that she was in an abusive relationship but after reading the song I didn't have that impression at all. Hope this helps,keep writing!

The song was great and my only problem is with the chorus:

And now I’m free…
Free from all the bullshit, pain,
You’re so annoying.
I’m so over this,
Don’t come around.
Unless you’re finally man enough to say sorry.

For some reason saying "bullshit, pain" just doesn't work well with me.