Young Writers Society

Jen! Thanks so much for the review! XD

Strikes reality, I guess meant that her guess was verified? =)) It struck reality. Like, "ahh...it was right." then she frowns. *pouts*

Then crane means extending the neck. =))

And profound, in my dictionary says, as a noun, means thinking. =))

Oh, I hope you listen to it. I'll have to check Dixie. XD

P.S. this is a song between bestfriends. x3 not mother and daughter. But it could be! =D/ Nice one, Jen. =))

Hey Jashy!

Remember I told you I might or might not review this?
Well, I'm going to not review this! =D
Instead, I'll just tell you how great it was. You're a wonderful singer and have a beautiful voice. I only wish I had the courage to sing. My voice is the mix between a donkey and a dying Edward Cullen so you can imagine how terrible that would sound.
Unfortunately, I still had to comment on this otherwise I would fail as a Father. :'(
Jenth and the others seem to have already gone through and covered much of this. Anyway, I epically stink at reviewing lyrics and poetry so I won't even bother with it. You did great and the lyrics are meaningful and wonderfully written.
Good job! I *likes* ^.^

-Daddy

Hey Jash
I'm not going to review this I just want to say that you have a really pretty voice and lyrics are awesome
Also could you tell me what chords you are using on the guitar?

This is so good! Oh my God! My only editing tip is that the line 'Clueless replies' did not seem to flow as well as the rest of the lyrics.

So not that you need this reveiw. Just thought I'd let you know how talented you are. Not that you already don't no.
You are so creative in your drawing,singing and writing.
This was so sweet and the lYrics were so moving. Well written.
All I CAN say is Wow what else can you do!?

Again, you have got the goods, baby.
great job!

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-jojo.

This was so ANAZING!!!! I have never meet anyone as talented as you. You can write, draw, sing, what can't you do. Anyways great lyrics, and song. I'm sorry there's not really much to review. Everyone beat me too it.


-lilgreendots <3

oh my god!!!!!
you are amazinggggg
i was reviewing other songs and then i came across yours
you are so tallented!!!
i loooove it
can you pleaaase enable downloading becouase i so want to download this!!!
i listened to it your amazing i liked the song, the way you played the guitar and your young voiceeee

Thanks to all who're liking this. XD

Oh, and yo SHeri! of course, you can! Just click on the "LISTEN" =)) It'll lead you to Muziboo, where there's an mp3 download button. =D/

Here I was coming to review but you've had so many great ones already!
You're very talented <3

Jashy, that was truly amazing. You are an extremely talented singer, songer writer, guitarist, etc haha you're amazing and that song was beautiful <3

LOVE YOU LOVE FRUITY