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Thu Oct 27, 2005 11:18 am
xoxMiaxox says...



So, here we are, At last we came
Our parents smile and give us a name
They let us live in a world of creation
They now know we are part of this nation
They cannot be us and see what we see
They must leave us and let us be
When we begin to hurt they can wish for no pain
No matter our loss creation is our gain
Let us be tortured in a world full with shame
If it werent for creation, we wouldnt have a name
We'll say our farewell, oh yes it shall come
The feeling is mutual, We just become numb
  





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Fri Nov 04, 2005 6:04 am
Micah says...



Is that just one long verse?
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Fri Nov 04, 2005 7:45 am
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Is it just me, or is there some irony that the person who wrote about creation isn't using the profile they created?
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Fri Nov 04, 2005 8:05 am
Micah says...



That's what I thought.
The book to read is not the one which thinks for you, but the one which makes you think. No book in the world equals the Bible for that.
Harper Lee
My sites:
http://www.wyattmuseum.com/
http://www.cafechrist.com/
  








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