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Mon Oct 24, 2005 2:42 am
niteowl says...



I'll admit it
Your beautiful eyes
Had me hooked from the start.

And I'll admit it.
You've still got a little
Piece of my heart, oh yeah

I don't know why I want you
When I know we don't have a chance

(Chorus)
Why don't you pick me up
And spin me around
And then wake me up
Send me crashing back down
From this pathetic dream
I'm living in,
I don't know why
I waste my time
When you're...so out of reach

I like to say that
I'm so totally
Over you

But then why do I
Still wake up realizing
I was dreaming of you?

I don't know why I want you
When I know we don't have a chance

(Repeat Chorus)

You look too good
You're a beautiful poison.
I catch one glimpse
And I want some more.

I sometimes still wonder
If you're really real
If I finally touched you,
Would you turn to dust?

(Repeat Chorus)
Last edited by niteowl on Sat Nov 05, 2005 8:27 pm, edited 1 time in total.
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Fri Nov 04, 2005 10:09 pm
VoLcOlYrO says...



niteowl wrote:I'll admit it
Your beautiful eyes
Had me hooked from the start.

And I'll admit it.
You've still got a little
Piece of my heart, oh yeah

I don't know why I want you
When I know we don't have a chance

(Chorus)
Why don't you pick me up
And spin me around
And then wake me up
Send me crashing back down
From this pathetic dream
I'm living in,
I don't know why
I waste my time
When you're...so out of reach

I like to say that
I'm so totally
Over you

But then why do I
Still wake up realizing
I was dreaming of you?

I don't know I want you
When I know we don't have a chance

(Repeat Chorus)

You look too good
You're a beautiful poiston.
I catch one glimpse
And I want some more.

I sometimes still wonder
If you're really real
If I finally touched you,
Would you turn to dust?

(Repeat Chorus)


Did you use spell check?? You did well at capitalizing, but what about spelling?? Besides that I can totally relate to your lyrics...I'm in love with this guy Dan Logue, but he is...well out of my reach. My point is that I think alot of people can relate to this. :wink:
we all know you wanna kiss him....go ahead see what happens when you do...do you know what it feels like to loose a friend? you will soon.

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He began to wonder why he had felt uneasy at all. It was like a man wondering in broad daylight why a dream had appeared so terrible to him at night.
— Chinua Achebe, Things Fall Apart