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Thu Apr 12, 2007 1:51 am
moosiegirl says...



People say
what they like
you cant change
whats inside

your the bread
and i'm the butter
we have gotta
stick together

cause times a wasting
and times a gone
there's not much left
for us

so just pick up your sorrows
and head out west

CHORUS
troubles come and troubles go
like the worlds bottled up
we wont last forever
and watch all the setting suns

but times a wasting
and we haven't got much left

END CHORUS

trains come and go
beyond the dirty tracks
we walk along
cars whizzing past

people can point
and they can holler
but they just cant dampen
the spirits already broken

when the going gets so tough
your my sun
and my stars
lighting up my way

CHORUS
Last edited by moosiegirl on Sat Jan 31, 2009 3:46 am, edited 1 time in total.
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Mon Apr 16, 2007 5:37 pm
Alainna says...



This is good, what genre of music would it be? It sounds kinda country.

This didn't make sense:
people can point
and they and holler


Great work, keep it up
Alainna
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Tue Apr 17, 2007 1:57 am
moosiegirl says...



it is country and ill change that part that doesnt makes sense
ty
*moosie*
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