Young Writers Society

Chocolate Rapper

Yo, aight, ya’ll hear what I’m sayin’?
HERSHE-E-E-EYS I-S-S-S D-AAAA BOMB!

Ok, so git it straight
You goin’ on a date?
I don’t mean, floosies, clubbin’
beers, an’ rubbin’, straight out, man,
Date with a girl you like, com’mon fellas:
Brothas, them sistas don’t want no poser,
Don’t wanna drive a friggin’ lexus, or a dozen roses
One thing is all they want, one thing and that is:

CHOCOLATE (Chocolate)
LEMME HEA’ YA SAY IT. I SAY
CHOCOLATE (Chocolate)
CHOCOLATE (Chocolate)
Cha-cha-cha-cha- Chocolate

You might be covering in bling
Diamond gold rings
She ain’t care
She too busy eatin’ to hear
And if you don’t treat her, man fix your ears
Girls ain’t want no bling or clothes
Which make them look like friggin’ hos: they want

CHOCOLATE (Chocolate)
LEMME HEA’ YA SAY IT. I SAY
CHOCOLATE (Chocolate)
CHOCOLATE (Chocolate)
Cha-cha-cha-cha- Chocolate

AHH SUGAR RUSH!

CHOCOLATE (Chocolate)
LEMME HEA’ YA SAY IT. I SAY
CHOCOLATE (Chocolate)
CHOCOLATE (Chocolate)
Cha-cha-cha-cha- Chocolate


I just thought it up, I don't care...
First damn thing in a month, enjoy, it's not here to be serious, though I am.
Now laugh. Or die!

xD

WTF?!?!

I kindaza like. kindaza not.

I see what your trying to do, trying to accomplish, and its pretty cool.

needs a bit of work. Add another verse, talk about how chocolate acts as an aphrodisiac. I mean, ok she dont want bling, but why?

First verse is good, that takes care of the not wantin anything but choco.

"one thing and that is" at the end of first verse, TAKE IT OUT. not needed. dont introduce the chorus, punch em in the face with it.

End of second verse is perfect to carry over into a third verse RE:aphrodisiac.

polish it up and you got something! VERY ORIGINAL.

I laughed. I like it.

They don't want bling cuz it makes them look like friggin' hos.

Funny! But a bit wierd at the same time. How did you end up thinking of this?

RR*

XD
I just thought that you should make a vid and put it on YouTube of you rapping this XD

Man, this was sweet (haha, bad pun)! I especially liked the "AHH SUGAR RUSH" part.

You say THAT part like the
STOP
HAMMERTIME!!!!!!!!
GO GO GO GO GO GO *repeat 2390848 times*

Love your avvie lol... JD *growls*

haha

Thanks! Although, to be perfectly honest, I couldn't care less about Johney Depp...I just like Willy Wonka.

It was certainly interesting, lol. Pretty good parody of typical rap, if that's what you intended. And I love chocolate myself, so, you ladies better be willing to share!

Funny work. Take care. =)