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A Deathly Christmas Parody



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Wed Dec 07, 2005 12:31 pm
Nis says...



I got the feeling this should have been for Hallowe'en?

I liked it though. :D :P
  





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Wed Dec 07, 2005 4:26 pm
Elizabeth says...



Wow, a lot of comments....
Maybe I should parody a few more songs for this morbidly, yet, surprisingly "HAPPY" holiday.
  





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Mon Dec 19, 2005 4:09 am
Jessie Hartman says...



Morbid...to an extreme degree. I am depressed now. You've got imagination,though, and the sick nature of these lyrics actually cause it to be amusing, in a...creepy...sort of way.
  





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Tue Dec 20, 2005 6:56 am
Elizabeth says...



That is one of the most nicest things anybody ever said about me *sobs*
Thank you all!

Merry Morbid Christmas everybody!
  





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Tue Dec 20, 2005 9:50 am
deleted6 says...



lol, call it the Morbid Christams parody collection.
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Tue Dec 20, 2005 5:07 pm
David Guinness says...



Very morbid, and I actually think it's very good. I do think, though, that it could be improved upon, slightly.

The first two stanzas I would rework to make rhyme (I know, I know); I think it could be really great then.

I would personally change the "tis the season" phrase, and the "tux's" phrase to make rhyme with the others, if you want to do this.

Still, enjoyable. I'd like to hear a children's chorus sing this, as a Weird Al type of thing.
David Guinness
  





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Wed Dec 21, 2005 4:25 pm
Elephant says...



I know a worse version. :D

I like it though. and your topic is on FIRE :twisted: (there is no fire emoticon so the devil smiley will have to work)

EL
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Wed Dec 21, 2005 11:35 pm
Elizabeth says...



*grabs fire extinguisher*
Ahh!!! *Attacks fire with the foam*

Thank you all for your compliments!
  








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