Hi! First off, thanks for reviewing:) This is a new direction in songwriting for me. It's much more abstract and less perfectly rhymed than the work I normally do, but this literally took me 10 minutes I was so inspired! So, please tell me what you think!
(Help me think of a new title, I reallyyy don't want to just call it "Crazy."
I’m laying it all on the line for you
I’ve laid it all for you for so long
I’ve been walking it out for you
Waiting it out in this broken song
And did I ever forget to tell you
That I’m crazy about you?
Yeah, I’m crazy for you.
And all the things that make us part
We have to put them aside
‘cause ever since you stole my heart
I knew that I could never hide
Because when something’s everything to you
It’s all you can do
To try to hold on.
And as the time goes around
The raindrops just bring me down
Oh and they fall they fall
Straight to the ground
And all my tears couldn’t
Stop this rain from flooding it up
'Cause you're all I think of
You're all I ever think about
And all the things that make us part
We have to put them aside
‘cause ever since you stole my heart
I knew that I could never hide
'Cause when something's everything to you
It's all you can do
To try to hold on.
Oh, and have I ever told you
That I’m crazy for you?
All I am is crazy for you
Just crazy
For you
And all the things that make us part
We have to put them aside
‘cause ever since you stole my heart
I knew that I could never hide
'Because you're everything to me
And you're all I can see
So I gotta hold on
I'll keep holding on.
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