A quick song I wrote for one of my friends. The song pretty much tells the story. Anwyays, this is kinda the first song I've written that already has actual music to go along with it and isn't just lyrics. So enjoy and critique!
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V.1
Beautiful boy, I see you standing there
And I'm trying not to stare,
Pretending I don't care anymore
Oo, once upon a time
you wanted to be mine
You and me were fine, just fine
C
And I'm trying so hard to figure this out
You're throwing my heart around and around
But I keep coming back for more
Say you're trying so hard to figure this out
You start to scream, start to shout
And I can't take it anymore
V.2
Beautiful boy, you've always held my heart
Even from the start
But it's gonna fall apart
Oo, Please don't go away
It's always been this way
Ever since I first fell for you
C
And I'm trying so hard to figure this out
You're throwing my heart around and around
But I keep coming back for more
Say you're trying so hard to figure this out
You start to scream, start to shout
And I can't take it anymore
B
And everytime you say goodbye
A little part inside of me dies
A little part inside of me, little part inside
little part inside of me dies
C.
And I'm trying so hard to figure this out
You're throwing my heart around and around
But I keep coming back for more
Say you're trying so hard to figure this out
You start to scream start to shout...
Outro (Or whatever)
Beautiful boy you're gonna break my heart
And I can't take it anymore
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So there's the song! Please review (:
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