Happy Valentine's Day YWS! =)

Jashael · 2011-02-11T14:46:08Z

The vid you're all been waiting for... ...or maybe not. :lol: Anyway, here it goes... Before you read on, listen to the song HERE while watching the epic faces of our YWSers. LOL I wanted more people to be in it. But since I've procrastinated this project enough, I had to rush the video. SPECIAL THANKS for the following YWSers (for their photos): baywolf25 Skins Whisperer Flower~Child Warrior Princess Tigersprite Kitty15 ScarletteRose Spitfire ultraviolet borntobeawriter Yuriiko PinkShearwater Persephoneia icepriness Flower~Child VitaminCakes Day Bondgirl007 Shubs! jolene XD .....who else I missed? I'm sleepy. *snores* A SIMPLE LOVE SONG by JASH BAGABALDO I’m making it seem like you’re forgettable to me When there’s not even a minute without me thinking of you There’s something from you that I really wanna reach (It’s your heart) And I know I’m being impulsive to move I’m still having second thoughts today 'Cause there’s just ain’t a thing not even one For me to feel this way Are you worth it? ...worth to be desperate upon? This melody’s stuck in my head These words that I have never said Are all that I know And I can’t seem to let go For now I’m just too occupied By things I can’t explain and deep inside I hope I won’t look like a fool But I’m just so in love with you I’d laugh at your face every time that you try To throw everyone your hilarious smile I fell for I won’t get caught uneasy by your side So nobody could tell that I keep wishing you were mine Just give me a quick stare And you’ll remain a clueless guy You may think that I don’t care But I do If you just lock your eyes on mine This melody’s stuck in my head These words that I have never said Are all that I know And I can’t seem to let go For now I’m just too occupied By things I can’t explain and deep inside I hope I won’t look like a fool But I’m just so in love with you I’m more than a half-page down* Don’t wanna see you around For awhile 'Cause I don’t wanna get too close to you Someday I might just open up Though I know this song ain’t enough I’m afraid to know what’s true This melody’s stuck in my head These words that I have never said Are all that I know And I can’t seem to let go For now I’m just too occupied By things I can’t explain and deep inside I hope I won’t look like a fool But I’m just so in love with you Don’t wanna wait for this to end 'Cause I’m definitely sure that I’ll regret Chances come and go I need you badly to know That for now I’m just too occupied By your looks, your laughs, and your charming smiles I hope that I won’t look like a fool But I’m just a girl that’s so in love… …with you! And I hope you'll learn to sing along Flow with the harmony of this simple love song... ♥ ~~~~~~ I wrote this when I was fourteen . And well... the song will speak for itself. I don't wanna update it or anything. It's "a simple love song"... so yeah. I wanted to leave it in its simple form... *this is probably a weird line, but for me, it kind of means... well, I was writing the song, and I was shocked of how long the song was becoming -- I was half-page down a yellow bond paper, plus my writing was small. So yeah, it's kind of random. But as I said, I don't wanna edit anything. And it's just one line. :P I think the most meaningful line for me here is... This melody’s stuck in my head . Because it's so true. I had the melody first and it got stuck, and then the happening became a line. Plus it reminds me of my innocence a couple of years ago. LOL So yeah... Thank you so much for reading, and/or listening. :D I hope you liked it! And don't forget to LIKE it if you do! :D If you wanna hear other songs from me, just follow the page Sol made: here. Thanks! :D And oh... .o♥ Happy Valentines ♥o. Everyone who responded to me (whether you're in the vid or not) will get gifts from me. :D SPREAD THE LOOOOOOOOOOVE. Sorry for the poor audio quality.

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Sat Feb 12, 2011 10:03 pm

borntobeawriter says... · Sat Feb 12, 2011 10:03 pm

hahah! I bursted out laughing when you said the 'fool' lyric and my sister's picture appeared. Oh, Lord. Can't wait to see her face.

This was great, Jashy. You're awesome <3

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Sat Feb 12, 2011 11:20 pm

Razcoon says... · Sat Feb 12, 2011 11:20 pm

Em looks EXACTLY how I imagined her! That being said, Skype. xD Oh, and a few other people, like Warrior Princess (whose avatars are her own pictures) and Bondgirl007 (again, Skype, though not often at all...still, I've seen her) And I look exactly how I imagined me! 'Cept I wasn't in your video. Shame. Cute video, cute song. :3

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Sat Feb 12, 2011 11:42 pm

stargazer9927 says... · Sat Feb 12, 2011 11:42 pm

Beautiful. And if that's you singing you have an amazing voice. And to write this at only fourteen is amazing! Keep it up and I hope to hear more.

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Sun Feb 13, 2011 1:50 am

lovethelifeulive says... · Sun Feb 13, 2011 1:50 am

Hi!
Wow, that was amzing!
You have the sweetest voice
AND YOU ARE SOOOOOO PRETTY!
Where were you in the video, onstage?
Wow, that was sooo kewl! The lyrics were very sweet to!
You have magic skillllllz! I hope you post more songs like this!

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Sun Feb 13, 2011 8:00 pm

Rydia says... · Sun Feb 13, 2011 8:00 pm

It's lovely! The lyrics are well composed and the video is beautiful, very nicely done!

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Sun Feb 13, 2011 9:21 pm

snailsareslimy says... · Sun Feb 13, 2011 9:21 pm

n'awww, that's so cute <3

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Sun Feb 13, 2011 9:32 pm

EmmaJane says... · Sun Feb 13, 2011 9:32 pm

All YWS are so pretty! (: ..You evil people. :p

Jash, it was so good: the singing and the video. SUCH a sweet song, too. You're so talented. (:

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Sun Feb 13, 2011 10:17 pm

XxMattxX says... · Sun Feb 13, 2011 10:17 pm

This is so cute. I love it.
Sorry i couldn't send you my pic. Haven't gone on for a about two or three days to due extracurricular activities.
But this is really cute.
God really gave you some talent!
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Mon Feb 14, 2011 3:43 am

Jashael says... · Mon Feb 14, 2011 3:43 am

Hey, guys! Thank you so much.

Jo, maybe next time, kay?

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Mon Feb 14, 2011 5:02 am

Kafkaescence says... · Mon Feb 14, 2011 5:02 am

Wow...I watched the video, and this was very well put together. Actually, I think the "half page down" line somehow fits. It makes you think, and can definitely be interpreted as romantic. I really like the chorus, by the way. And happy Valentine's Day to you too!

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Mon Feb 14, 2011 2:46 pm

Lil_Pau says... · Mon Feb 14, 2011 2:46 pm

Like the title, it's a simple song, but very meaningful. The lyrics convey their message wonderfully, and the whole arrangement actually fits the song. I love this, poor audio quality or not. <3 <3

Good job! Have a Happy Valentine's Day!

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Tue Feb 15, 2011 11:53 am

harshita3chaarag says... · Tue Feb 15, 2011 11:53 am

well...hey!! nice song...and the video is pretty nice too.....loved it!!:D

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Tue Feb 15, 2011 2:02 pm

Jashael says... · Tue Feb 15, 2011 2:02 pm

Thank you so much ya'll!!!

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Wed Feb 16, 2011 12:34 am

jolene says... · Wed Feb 16, 2011 12:34 am

you forgot my name!!!! Lol

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Mon Mar 07, 2011 10:42 am

crestfallen says... · Mon Mar 07, 2011 10:42 am

I agree with this person...."This is great Jashy,

I really enjoyed it. Your lines were meaningfull.

My favourite was the video thingy. Now I want to know who is who.
I guess I'm too curious for my own good. Some people are real posers. I'm thinking thats skinsy but I'll have to find out somehow.

Makes mind up to stalk the photo's

Well done Jashy.
On line bugged me a teeeny bit,

I’m making it seem like you’re forgettable to me

It doesn't really make that much sense. Forgettable to me? I'm not even sure what your trying to say. Is it-I'm trying to make it seem like you're easy to foget or something along those lines?

I know you dont really want to edit but I just wanted to point that out.

Good job with the video. It was my total fave.

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