Young Writers Society

hahah! I bursted out laughing when you said the 'fool' lyric and my sister's picture appeared. Oh, Lord. Can't wait to see her face.

This was great, Jashy. You're awesome <3

Em looks EXACTLY how I imagined her! That being said, Skype. xD Oh, and a few other people, like Warrior Princess (whose avatars are her own pictures) and Bondgirl007 (again, Skype, though not often at all...still, I've seen her) And I look exactly how I imagined me! 'Cept I wasn't in your video. Shame. Cute video, cute song. :3

Beautiful. And if that's you singing you have an amazing voice. And to write this at only fourteen is amazing! Keep it up and I hope to hear more.

Hi!
Wow, that was amzing!
You have the sweetest voice
AND YOU ARE SOOOOOO PRETTY!
Where were you in the video, onstage?
Wow, that was sooo kewl! The lyrics were very sweet to!
You have magic skillllllz! I hope you post more songs like this!

It's lovely! The lyrics are well composed and the video is beautiful, very nicely done!

n'awww, that's so cute <3

All YWS are so pretty! (: ..You evil people. :p

Jash, it was so good: the singing and the video. SUCH a sweet song, too. You're so talented. (:

Hey, guys! Thank you so much.

Jo, maybe next time, kay?

Wow...I watched the video, and this was very well put together. Actually, I think the "half page down" line somehow fits. It makes you think, and can definitely be interpreted as romantic. I really like the chorus, by the way. And happy Valentine's Day to you too!

-Kafka

Like the title, it's a simple song, but very meaningful. The lyrics convey their message wonderfully, and the whole arrangement actually fits the song. I love this, poor audio quality or not. <3 <3

Good job! Have a Happy Valentine's Day!

well...hey!! nice song...and the video is pretty nice too.....loved it!!:D

Thank you so much ya'll!!!

you forgot my name!!!! Lol

I agree with this person...."This is great Jashy,

I really enjoyed it. Your lines were meaningfull.

My favourite was the video thingy. Now I want to know who is who.
I guess I'm too curious for my own good. Some people are real posers. I'm thinking thats skinsy but I'll have to find out somehow.

Makes mind up to stalk the photo's

Well done Jashy.
On line bugged me a teeeny bit,

I’m making it seem like you’re forgettable to me

It doesn't really make that much sense. Forgettable to me? I'm not even sure what your trying to say. Is it-I'm trying to make it seem like you're easy to foget or something along those lines?

I know you dont really want to edit but I just wanted to point that out.

Good job with the video. It was my total fave.