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Stay Tonight



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Gender: Female
Points: 1045
Reviews: 4
Thu Jan 20, 2011 10:19 am
khaliath says...



I don’t mean to cut in line,
But I got something to say.
With all these people talkin’ at you,
It’s hard to find my place.

I can’t do this song and dance, anymore,
Cause it always ends the same.
With me going left, and you going right.
So baby, make this easy,
Stay tonight.

Now you know it’s hard for me,
To find the right words.
But when I look in your eyes,
It all seems so simple.

Cause I can’t do this song and dance, anymore,
Cause it always ends the same.
With me going left and you going right.
So baby, make this easy,
Stay tonight.

You gotta make the choice babe,
Cause the middle ain’t working.
I got no time for waiting,
I got things to do.

I can’t do this song and dance, anymore,
Cause it always ends the same.
With me going left, and you going right.
So baby, make this easy,
Stay tonight.

There is no wrong answer,
It’s just gotta be an honest one.
If you say the word,
I’ll walk away.

Cause I can’t do this song and dance, anymore,
It always ends the same.
With me going left, and you going right.
So baby, make this easy,
Stay tonight.

Baby, you can make this easy,
And just stay tonight.
so, shed some light on me.
and hold me up, in disbelief.
and shed some light, on me,
and tell me something that i'll believe.
-shinedown-
  





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Thu Jan 20, 2011 4:27 pm
paperbackheart says...



I love this. Just wanted to say. I didn't find anything wrong with it. All your grammar is correct as is spelling. It gets the message across very well.
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Gender: Female
Points: 1045
Reviews: 4
Thu Jan 20, 2011 7:12 pm
khaliath says...



Thank you!
so, shed some light on me.
and hold me up, in disbelief.
and shed some light, on me,
and tell me something that i'll believe.
-shinedown-
  








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