Young Writers Society

I'd written this when I was ten. Kinda sad story. My Dad had had to go abroad to work, so this was dedicated to him.

Life without you
There’s no melody in music
Life without you
There’s no movement in dance
Life without you
There’re no stars in the sky
Life without you
Oh! I think I’m gonna cry

CHORUS:
I tell you it’s you I need
Right by my side
Yeah! That’s what I said
So, tell me you’re coming back
Life is just not the same without you
Life without you

Life without you
There’re no leaves on the trees
Life without you
Oh! Why just can’t you see?
Life without you
There’s no smile, but a frown
Life without you
In my tears I’m gonna drown

CHORUS:
I tell you it’s you I need
Right by my side
Yeah! That’s what I said
So, tell me you’re coming back
Life is just not the same without you
Life without you

CODA:
But who is there to blame
That you are not near
When I need you here
To get rid of my fears
To wipe away my tears
So, I’m asking you please
Make my dreams come true
And come home back here!

CHORUS:
I tell you it’s you I need
Right by my side
Yeah! That’s what I said
So, tell me you’re coming back
Life is just not the same without you
Life without you
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BRAVO....
You really have some talent if you wrote it at the age of ten....
I like it a lot....
I would to sing along if someone sets the right tune for it...
Keep posting and keep writing...
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Welcome to YWS....

Hey, Im new and this is one of the first ones I've read and I say..That's awesome!! If you wrote that at the age of ten..i can't imagine just how much You've got to offer! Keep at it dude!!

this is very good and would love to read more of you stuff.