Although this is my first song I've ever written, I would really like to know what you think of it. It goes in the book I'm writing so I need to know if it's any good or not. I'm also not sure if songs use puncuation but oh well.
This is Where I am Now
Looking back now
All I see,
Are the memories
Forever haunting me
[Increasing Beat]
(Chorus)
But look at me now,
Here I am;
Standing right before you
This is me,
In the flesh;
Standing right beside you
This is where
I am now
(End Chorus)
[Original Tempo]
Might as well
Be a slave
For you treated me
No,no,no
Differently
But who's to say
I'm not your equal?
[Increasing Beat]
[Electric Guitar Solo]
(Chorus)
But look at me now,
Here I am;
Standing right before you
This is me,
In the flesh;
Standing right beside you
This is where
I am now
(End Chorus)
[Repeat Chorus]
[End Song, Fade Out]
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