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In life, In love, In death



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Mon Apr 11, 2011 1:36 pm
Demoness says...



Poem Nr. 1

Hand in hand,
we live.

Heart to Heart,
we love.

Side by side,
we die.
"Some say the world will end in fire;
Some say in ice.
From what I've tasted of desire
I hold with those who favor fire.
But if it had to perish twice,
I think I know enough of hate
To say that for destruction ice
Is also great
And would suffice." - Robert Frost
  





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Fri Apr 15, 2011 1:30 am
NaRachel says...



Wow its short. Very dramatic, i like it and to me it isn't cliche although others might think differently. Its hard to say much about something so short but well done for being bold and writing it this way. To me it sounds like a good slogan to a movie :)
"You grow, you grow like tornado
You grow from the inside
Destroy everything through
Destroy from the inside
Erupt like volcano
You flow from the inside
You kill everything through
You kill from the inside"
  








When a good man is hurt, all who would be called good must suffer with him.
— Euripides