Young Writers Society

Poetry inspired by stress and tick off .. ness.
Goal: 20 days; 20 poems each
Day 01
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Knock Them on Down

Coming and going,
that's what these people are.
From the tips of their hairs,
to the points of their toes.

Falling. That's what we're all doing,
yelling, screaming, and shrieking even.
Down a painful fall that's yet for us to recover.

Life. What a cruel mistress you are,
with your sisters Destiny and Fate.
But we, the human people,
are just going to knock each other on down.

Down,
down,
down
we're going.
Going to where?

That's what we're yet to know.
Alone? Who said that?
No one said that we're not in this together.
Because we're gonna knock them on down.

For yet, we are to stand up again,
and fall right on down again.

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..Edited and thought up on the spot. Review please. (: I hope that it's well liked, as every one else does and would think since it's common sense. ;D Bet you don't know what's the message that I'm trying to get across.
~ItsRainbowInked

Well well well well. Is this like saying "you knock us down but we will fight back"? So cliche, yet your poem is so original. No no. This is not saying yoj will. This is saying "we all just keep falling over and getting beat up, snap the hell out of it and fight back" right? The only problem i have i why do you say in the first stanza, tips of your toes or whatever. It doesnt fit. Otherwise, this is quite finely put together.