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Universal Heart Break



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Thu Apr 07, 2011 9:42 pm
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I am crying in my ship.
Seeing you and your dude just broke my hip.
I am so crying as the ship takes off from the forest.
I'd be lying if I wanted to stay and see you anyway.

Something is cooking in hell today and that shall not go well.
A red cloud of mixed with black and blue surrounds him and you.
I just cannot watch, so I use my shoe and land back to you,him to.

You jump in at the last moment and he gets swallowed up to be used in soup.
As we fly away, as we fly away a smirk appears on my face, but you say not today.
You start to scream, to scream, scream... is this some bad dream?
You try to jump out into the storm, a nightmare has just been born up. I just feel so torn up.

I try tape you down, but you scream and bite me down. You just jump, you just jump, you just jumped now your falling into the storm. A nightmare born up,feel so torn up. Panicking, I throw a mystic unicorn horn up. Before you hit the storm, it shrinks to a size of a small cup.
Now your falling ,down,your falling down ,NOW!
Last edited by CardDragon on Mon Apr 18, 2011 12:30 am, edited 1 time in total.
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Fri Apr 08, 2011 8:57 pm
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I jump off the ship and quickly catch on to to your hips.
I pull you up and I am greeted with your lips.
Though something is wrong, you move back and in my side is a bloody throng.
How could you do this to me? I collapse into a sea of red.
Something is wrong and in place is another head smeared with blue.
In only two the ship lands to the ground
and you fly off without making a sound.
Ohh this was a trap,a sudden mishap.
Ohh this was a trap,a sudden mishap.
Ohh this was a trap,a sudden mishap.
I struggle up and try to reach that special light, which could turn the day into night.
In agony, I fall to the floor,floor,floor, the floor!
Someone is walks in the door,it is you.
With that total shade of blue, you grab the light and stab it into me with a fright.
The world is white, whiter than light in the brightest star in the galaxy.
I thank you with a kiss of fidelity, we go on happily.
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Sat Apr 09, 2011 8:07 pm
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Half Hour,Half Power
In between today and yesterday
In some brilliant way
This day is not gone.
Tomorrow is not alone.
For it has a friend until when time ascends
So cheer, time fanatics everywhere, Midday is here.
And have no fear, even though a new day is near.
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Sun Apr 10, 2011 11:52 pm
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I once love a girl, seeing her rocked my world.
It could have lasted for ever
but whenever I sat next to her.
She showed her fangs to me, and right then I just wanted to get up and flee.
I was so unlucky, because I now miss you and me.
Now were grown up, and your his girl.
This person's vision is blurred in evil.
What he would do to you.
Only what I would do if I had you, Jo.
Please come back to me, this is a catastrophe.
Only what I would I do if he had not come after you.
I should have heard you screaming last night, cause you were in sheer fright.
I saw you dying at the end of the night.
Barely saving you by the break of light.
Oh please come back to me this is a catastrophe.
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Mon Apr 11, 2011 8:45 pm
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Oh sleep is far beyond deep.
But I need sleep.
I hunger for the goddess of dreams.
Way more than I hunger for many ice creams.
Please inner soul, don't let me go.
Even though this work is taking its toll.
I hunger for the goddess of dreams.
Well tomorrow, I shall be have to be making seams
for the dresses of girls dreams.
But I need sleep.
I am so in too deep.

Oh that black liquid will not help turn my motors.
It just messed up the design for a dress with rotors.

Oh sleep is far beyond deep.
But I need sleep.
I hunger for the goddess of dreams.
Way more than I hunger for many ice creams.
Please inner soul, don't let me go.
Even though this work is taking its toll.
I hunger for the goddess of dreams.
Well tomorrow, I shall be have to be making seams
for the dresses of girls dreams.
But I need sleep.
I am so in too deep.
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Tue Apr 12, 2011 8:41 pm
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As I travel across space
i wonder if I'm out of place.
Traveling in space and its a race that never seems to end.
Traveling forever is traveling that never ends.
We could never be newly weds.
But that depends, but because i lost your planet.
By the winter frost, i think it was better,
because i couldn't stand the weather.

We used to play all day, in May.
But of all the people on planet Earth ,
we where the ones who had to pay.
There were no beach-y summer days.
No eating ice cream in the hay.
All those days went away, when I couldn't stay.

So I say good day. So we went are way.
I could fell my 4 hearts fray.

We used to play all day, in May.
But of all the people on planet Earth ,
we where the ones who had to pay.
There were no beach-y summer days.
No eating ice cream in the hay.
All those days went away, when I couldn't stay.

Maybe its that day I will write you letter.
With a blue jay feather.
And find that colorful hue of a planet.
I'll storm threw the cosmic weather,
and write letters to you Heather.

It will be much better when I land
and well hold hands. And I'll give you back your
Blue jay feather
and write letters to you Heather.
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Wed Apr 13, 2011 8:51 pm
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I watched as a mountain caramelized in front of me.
And possibly behind me is killer to be.
Cause what's happening to the planet, is simply to kill for
cause people just go door to door eating other people's houses.
Damn these extraterrestrial mouses.
Our world is being turn into a banquet for the metal moon.
To be spooned out by a large spoon.

The ground is sticky, even the trash can is food.
Though I would not suggest eating it, because it will not put you into a good mood.
It is hard to jump on a jelly floor, because every jump ends up in a big thump.
someone how I got to end this catastrophe, just possibly.
I traveled on lemonade ocean, and with devotion I landed near the mountains,
that pour down sugar fountains.
To see mountains get caramelized into brown sugar configurations.
This power will end civilizations.
Someone how I got to end this catastrophe.
But someone went and did my job for me.
I watch as a monster explodes in the sky.
The sun is painted with a green dye.
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Thu Apr 14, 2011 8:54 pm
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I wish I could run away and find my own place to stay.
To stay away, from the people who want me to pay
and from the people that are losing the game of life.
that we play every day.

Sorrowing spires and something that the girl next door admires.
A closet full of hats that hang on the ceiling walls like bats.
A room where visions run wild and don't lack for style.
I would put my papers in a fashionable pile.
a place where i could transport myself from here to some miles.
my house would never go out of style,
and it would clean itself and never be mean to me.

AND I WOULD CALL IT
my name,
and that's not a shame.

I could run threw miles of exotic plants.
Everyone would dance and chant.
I could go to France and go to other worlds in advance.

Sometimes I get pulled away from my dream world and into reality.
Where there is a loss for formality.
I can only hope it will become reality.
In that world called my name where no one's to blame.
In that world called my name.
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Sat Apr 16, 2011 4:24 am
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I am a bear with red hair.
I give people a good scare, whenever I'm there.
Oh the glorious kingdoms of foods, fill my moods.
Pizza is like airplanes,hamburgers come in the size of great Danes.
Sparkling lemonade is good to surf on, but not to drown in.
A great town of donuts is brought on.
Now I am done,so I relax in the sun.
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Sun Apr 17, 2011 1:05 am
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I saw you in the park, girl it was dark.
I don't intend to be a criminal, but girl you got looks to steal for.
Even if I roped you up and took you to my door,
You still would not give me your love and more.
I don't on being a criminal, but to be critical- I will just have to steal your heart.
Just let the body relax when I am speaking.
Even though bad words are leaking from your mouth.(From somewhere opposite of south).
Then as if the roles had changed,your lips become De-arranged.
You just attack me and I cannot let you be.
Now I am in a bed and I am so sleepy.
Girl, you just romanticized me.
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Sun Apr 17, 2011 9:12 pm
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We came from a world of bread and butter.
These people came from a world were everything is feared in dread.
Sent here by a who, we all know what to do.
Fight each other so we can get out at night.
Now I am starting to doubt that what have we done is right,
is that we've picked the wrong fight.
Nights of blood fill the forest.
We are so tried off this place and a man without a face.
We travel to the head nest,both the best and the rest.
A green explosion fills the night, and kills the captors who weren't to bright.
Who let the brains of their prisoners out of sight.
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Mon Apr 18, 2011 10:01 pm
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If you tell a lie on top of a lie on top of a lie, a lie on that lie,on top of another lie,
...then you might as well just dig yourself a hole and die.
People that were once your friends will go out and cry.
"Riot or not, she's always late!"
You always happen to get here at eight.
Which is past the date from class.
You think you can manipulate and cultivate people to your demand.
Your just a snake biting a hand.
When a person finds about the truth about you, something rips inside of you.
Fling your minions like chips,but the truth will always reach out of a million lips.
The end for you is coming and the Grim Reaper is steady humming.
You shall learn a lesson to speak the truth or you will be packed in a coffin booth.
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Tue Apr 19, 2011 8:42 pm
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I see you going to lunch.
I admire you while your passing by.
Even though I will never ask.
For it would be too much of a task.
I will say this now, I will say this now...
I will not look at you, even though my eyes are glued to you.
I will not fascinate and romanticize about you.
I will not kiss you, even though that is bound to be due.
I will not throw sugar on you and lick you to.
I will not come to your door and give you a shoe.
I will not make a fool of you.
I shall never,ever love you.
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Wed Apr 20, 2011 9:04 pm
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I train every morning to dawn in front of the dojo lawn.
I'm not the best but whats to detest about kicking and spinning.
Soon I will be winning and girls will grin every time I pass by.
Though the dojo died so many girls cried when their
husbands went up to never come back down.
Full of anger,I strapped on my boots and cut down the roots...
To a hideout in the jungle where people were getting sacrificed.
Blood felled the night, and I can't explain because it causes too much pain.
A warrior fell headfirst stopping his blood thirst. This was not like I imagined, war is too savage.
In some rage a girl attacked me, who thought I was one of them. She collapsed and grasped my bloody hem.
Like someone had said this was not enough blood and gust, a machine filled with rust, exploded.
I ran carrying her as the world around me slowly eroded.
I had escaped but it was like my dreams had been scraped.
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Fri Apr 22, 2011 3:34 am
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Lets watch some movies from an adventurous time when all things were groovy.
If you let me watch a western, well have a duel and I'll take my turn.
Well return to the moons of zalabar in a red painted car.
Just watching we'll strap on a rocket ship and go so far.
If we go crazy we just have to remember who we are.
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