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Mon Apr 04, 2011 7:08 am
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So, Nate's post inspired to me to do something during my study breaks and what better than to write some crap lines of poetry? And I'm restricting myself to ten minutes. It'll probably be short; let's see how those pretentious words flow. ;)
And this will be my first NaPo-sort-of and I hope to finish it!

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Wed Apr 13, 2011 7:41 pm
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I love it when you write about things/use words that belong to your own culture, like "yet, it's the sounds of sitar /
layered with the Suprabhatam". I hope you'll keep doing that!
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- Ian McEwan in Atonement

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